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	<title>Comments on: Four Metaphor Poetry</title>
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		<title>By: Sabrina</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-315</link>
		<dc:creator>Sabrina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:57:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Books are memories with words of wisdom, they tell
stories that are true or false and have dreams about traveling

Books are poeple with their thoughts, their pasts and future,
they tell stories that are sad and happy 

Books are poetry, when you pick up a book you are tingling 
insideof you, that means you really want to read it

Books are music singing inside of you,
they sing culture, they sing myths and legends</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Books are memories with words of wisdom, they tell<br />
stories that are true or false and have dreams about traveling</p>
<p>Books are poeple with their thoughts, their pasts and future,<br />
they tell stories that are sad and happy </p>
<p>Books are poetry, when you pick up a book you are tingling<br />
insideof you, that means you really want to read it</p>
<p>Books are music singing inside of you,<br />
they sing culture, they sing myths and legends</p>
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		<title>By: willow</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-314</link>
		<dc:creator>willow</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:53:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Life
By Willow Napolitano 
	Life is a door
Opening an opportunity to a new journey
When your journey ends the door shuts…
And a new generation begins

Life is a butterfly 
It gets in its cocoon and then it bursts in to it true self 
And flies away like a delicate antique with all the 
thing you will see in live nature is the most beautiful   

Life is a flower  
It grows up and waits to get gathered with all 
the memorable things you have done in your lifetime
the beautiful aroma as the wonderful things in life 

Life is a paper clip 
Holding all things special to you   
  It’s like your memory helping you remember the thing in life</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Life<br />
By Willow Napolitano<br />
	Life is a door<br />
Opening an opportunity to a new journey<br />
When your journey ends the door shuts…<br />
And a new generation begins</p>
<p>Life is a butterfly<br />
It gets in its cocoon and then it bursts in to it true self<br />
And flies away like a delicate antique with all the<br />
thing you will see in live nature is the most beautiful   </p>
<p>Life is a flower<br />
It grows up and waits to get gathered with all<br />
the memorable things you have done in your lifetime<br />
the beautiful aroma as the wonderful things in life </p>
<p>Life is a paper clip<br />
Holding all things special to you<br />
  It’s like your memory helping you remember the thing in life</p>
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		<title>By: Abbie</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-313</link>
		<dc:creator>Abbie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:52:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A Friend 
By: Abbie 

A Friend is like the Sun
Always bright and happy 
Always keeping you warm inside 
Know you have someone or something to trust they’ll be there for you  

A Friend is New York 
Lit all the time with glow from the lights of time square  
Flowing with joy and excitement

A Friend is the Universe 
Showing countless creations of the Universe from big to small from black to white 
But they’re still all beautiful no matter what shape or size they are  
Never knowing what tomorrow will hold on this journey
Sometimes it’s hard to find your way through the bright and dark times 

A Friend is a Dog
They can get angry at you by showing their teeth
 But you know they’ll forgive you by trying to love you and play 
They love to have fun and play all the time</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A Friend<br />
By: Abbie </p>
<p>A Friend is like the Sun<br />
Always bright and happy<br />
Always keeping you warm inside<br />
Know you have someone or something to trust they’ll be there for you  </p>
<p>A Friend is New York<br />
Lit all the time with glow from the lights of time square<br />
Flowing with joy and excitement</p>
<p>A Friend is the Universe<br />
Showing countless creations of the Universe from big to small from black to white<br />
But they’re still all beautiful no matter what shape or size they are<br />
Never knowing what tomorrow will hold on this journey<br />
Sometimes it’s hard to find your way through the bright and dark times </p>
<p>A Friend is a Dog<br />
They can get angry at you by showing their teeth<br />
 But you know they’ll forgive you by trying to love you and play<br />
They love to have fun and play all the time</p>
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		<title>By: Halen</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-312</link>
		<dc:creator>Halen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:51:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alexis Hope 
By: Halen 

Alexis is a GPS
 Demanding you and telling you what to do 
And when to do it

Alexis is a princess 
Spoiled as can be wearing 
A flowy gown with her pink sparkly tiara

Alexis is a tornado 
Messing up everything in her path,
 Destroying everything she can 
Get her hands on but
 Not helping to clean up the mess

Alexis is a kitty cat 
Getting everything she ever wanted and prancing around
 Like she owns the whole 
World and everyone LOVES her.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alexis Hope<br />
By: Halen </p>
<p>Alexis is a GPS<br />
 Demanding you and telling you what to do<br />
And when to do it</p>
<p>Alexis is a princess<br />
Spoiled as can be wearing<br />
A flowy gown with her pink sparkly tiara</p>
<p>Alexis is a tornado<br />
Messing up everything in her path,<br />
 Destroying everything she can<br />
Get her hands on but<br />
 Not helping to clean up the mess</p>
<p>Alexis is a kitty cat<br />
Getting everything she ever wanted and prancing around<br />
 Like she owns the whole<br />
World and everyone LOVES her.</p>
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		<title>By: Joey Becher</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-311</link>
		<dc:creator>Joey Becher</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:50:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Football

Football is practice
 Engaging your enemy
Trying harder and harder each day
Practice doesn’t always make perfect
 you got to try hard for what you love

Football is triumph
 It’s winning not losing 
It’s that good felling in your heart that you
 know you contributed to your team
 and helped them get a victory

Football is battle
 Struggling with your opponent 
It’s being able to look your enemy in the eyes and
show no fear and have no fear doesn’t matter if he is
big or small if you try you can defeat him

Football is patience
 You need to wait for the perfect
time to strike when you walk on to that field and your
not on it for the first play you need to have patience
the more patients you have you won’t sit on the bench
as long it’s all about patience</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Football</p>
<p>Football is practice<br />
 Engaging your enemy<br />
Trying harder and harder each day<br />
Practice doesn’t always make perfect<br />
 you got to try hard for what you love</p>
<p>Football is triumph<br />
 It’s winning not losing<br />
It’s that good felling in your heart that you<br />
 know you contributed to your team<br />
 and helped them get a victory</p>
<p>Football is battle<br />
 Struggling with your opponent<br />
It’s being able to look your enemy in the eyes and<br />
show no fear and have no fear doesn’t matter if he is<br />
big or small if you try you can defeat him</p>
<p>Football is patience<br />
 You need to wait for the perfect<br />
time to strike when you walk on to that field and your<br />
not on it for the first play you need to have patience<br />
the more patients you have you won’t sit on the bench<br />
as long it’s all about patience</p>
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		<title>By: Rachel</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-310</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:49:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Art
By Rachel

Art is a veil
 covering up what someone truly means,
 lying, and hiding the truth from someone.

Art is a waves
 riding the soft sand as they roll up the beach,
 flowing causally as each stroke might be the last,
 spraying water is dabbing brush strokes as gentle as the water.

Art is time,
 the time to greatness, it will tick by as something or nothing will get done,
 choose to get something done and greatness will come.

Art is a balloon,
 as each breath goes in the balloon gets bigger and better,
 same with art, it gets better when you put effort into it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Art<br />
By Rachel</p>
<p>Art is a veil<br />
 covering up what someone truly means,<br />
 lying, and hiding the truth from someone.</p>
<p>Art is a waves<br />
 riding the soft sand as they roll up the beach,<br />
 flowing causally as each stroke might be the last,<br />
 spraying water is dabbing brush strokes as gentle as the water.</p>
<p>Art is time,<br />
 the time to greatness, it will tick by as something or nothing will get done,<br />
 choose to get something done and greatness will come.</p>
<p>Art is a balloon,<br />
 as each breath goes in the balloon gets bigger and better,<br />
 same with art, it gets better when you put effort into it.</p>
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		<title>By: Kyle</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-309</link>
		<dc:creator>Kyle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:48:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Snow is like a feather
they may look the same but as you
look closer
they spark with
there indivuality.

Snow is like a freshly painted wall 
yes it looks weight but when 	 
reveled to the sun the true crystals shin out.

Snow is like lace 
beautiful in its own way 
but deep inside it holds 
memories some popping out but 
some conservative and shy.

Snow is like a feeling	
it can melt in
Pressure   it has the power to heal and
to hurt but snow douse have one very 
great power making people happy.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Snow is like a feather<br />
they may look the same but as you<br />
look closer<br />
they spark with<br />
there indivuality.</p>
<p>Snow is like a freshly painted wall<br />
yes it looks weight but when<br />
reveled to the sun the true crystals shin out.</p>
<p>Snow is like lace<br />
beautiful in its own way<br />
but deep inside it holds<br />
memories some popping out but<br />
some conservative and shy.</p>
<p>Snow is like a feeling<br />
it can melt in<br />
Pressure   it has the power to heal and<br />
to hurt but snow douse have one very<br />
great power making people happy.</p>
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		<title>By: shawnine</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/11/27/8/comment-page-1/#comment-163</link>
		<dc:creator>shawnine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2009 00:47:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dancing is like frogs jumping rope
Dancing is like wind through time
Expanding in the matter of mine
Movements which pave the way
lighteningbolts moving 
Sparking attention my way</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dancing is like frogs jumping rope<br />
Dancing is like wind through time<br />
Expanding in the matter of mine<br />
Movements which pave the way<br />
lighteningbolts moving<br />
Sparking attention my way</p>
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