http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/ A Place for Student Writers to Publish Writing that was Inspired at WritingFix Mon, 02 Nov 2009 19:01:48 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-142 Austin B. Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:28:22 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-142 It was a blizzardy cold night. My bedroom window pounced open, it was so cold that I had to shut with a BANG. I saw that it had began to snow. The snow fell viciously as I walked to take out the trash. There I stood in the middle of my driveway frozen still scouling at the rode of glitering crystal. It was a blizzardy cold night. My bedroom window pounced open, it was so cold that I had to shut with a BANG. I saw that it had began to snow. The snow fell viciously as I walked to take out the trash. There I stood in the middle of my driveway frozen still scouling at the rode of glitering crystal.

]]> http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-141 Dylan M Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:17:18 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-141 The man laughed extemly hard and made an earsplitting noise.He laughed so hard coke came out of his eyes and nose.You could see he was not melancholy.Eventhough no one told a joke and no one slipped on a banana peel he still broke his laugh box.He was laughing at a Youtube video.That is why Santa Clause laughed so hard. The man laughed extemly hard and made an earsplitting noise.He laughed so hard coke came out of his eyes and nose.You could see he was not melancholy.Eventhough no one told a joke and no one slipped on a banana peel he still broke his laugh box.He was laughing at a Youtube video.That is why Santa Clause laughed so hard.

]]> http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-140 Chris T Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:12:25 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-140 I am going to fail again.No no no nooooh.When I said again it was because last week i failed in the same subject last week too,math. Although studying isn’t hard I still didn’t like to do it so i didn’t and now I can’t remember anything about the test.If I fail my dad will ground me.That means three entire months without outside,computer,videogames,or phone.Well,atleast i sit next to three major nerds so i guess i will copy of their papers and then finally I might actually ace a test.Oh no I was caught,on the last guestion,Bob screams,”the student cheated.”After going through all this trouble and fear I still flunked the test along with a week of detention. I am going to fail again.No no no nooooh.When I said again it was because last week i failed in the same subject last week too,math. Although studying isn’t hard I still didn’t like to do it so i didn’t and now I can’t remember anything about the test.If I fail my dad will ground me.That means three entire months without outside,computer,videogames,or phone.Well,atleast i sit next to three major nerds so i guess i will copy of their papers and then finally I might actually ace a test.Oh no I was caught,on the last guestion,Bob screams,”the student cheated.”After going through all this trouble and fear I still flunked the test along with a week of detention.

]]> http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-139 Bryce L. Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:11:41 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-139 A shark swam. It swam low and silently under the water, like an underwater spy. At the same moment an unexpecting swimmer went into the gulf, but didn’t know what was to come to him later on. The deadly sea animal had heard him get into the greenish-blue water, so it swam lower and more silently. As the man began to swim toward the sand bar, the carnivious fish was waiting for him twenty feet away. Moving at the speed of light the enormous fish had swallowed him whole! After that moment everyboby got out of the water and stayed out for a hour. Why you ask? Because a huge sea fish might be out there waiting for his desert. A shark swam. It swam low and silently under the water, like an underwater spy. At the same moment an unexpecting swimmer went into the gulf, but didn’t know what was to come to him later on. The deadly sea animal had heard him get into the greenish-blue water, so it swam lower and more silently. As the man began to swim toward the sand bar, the carnivious fish was waiting for him twenty feet away. Moving at the speed of light the enormous fish had swallowed him whole! After that moment everyboby got out of the water and stayed out for a hour. Why you ask? Because a huge sea fish might be out there waiting for his desert.

]]> http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-138 Allyse D. Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:11:15 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-138 One day, it was snowing.The air was cold and muggy.Trees were covered with snow and icycles.Leafless trees blew in the breeze coming out of the Northwest.Sounds of birds were calming.melted snow fell gracefully on the ground.The very first sign of spring was a little green leaf on the soon-to-not-be-leafless tree.That is a wonderful sight to see having been under all that snow for the entire season of winter. One day, it was snowing.The air was cold and muggy.Trees were covered with snow and icycles.Leafless trees blew in the breeze coming out of the Northwest.Sounds of birds were calming.melted snow fell gracefully on the ground.The very first sign of spring was a little green leaf on the soon-to-not-be-leafless tree.That is a wonderful sight to see having been under all that snow for the entire season of winter.

]]> http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-137 Harrison J Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:09:11 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-137 One morning, a teenager was takin a drivers test.The driver was on the highway, but all off a sudden adeer sprinted like a race car into the middle of the highway.Right when the driver saw the deer, he swerved out of the way.As he swerved out of the way the wheel popped,andsparcks flew every like a firework.Luckily the driver and instructor were ok. One morning, a teenager was takin a drivers test.The driver was on the highway, but all off a sudden adeer sprinted like a race car into the middle of the highway.Right when the driver saw the deer, he swerved out of the way.As he swerved out of the way the wheel popped,andsparcks flew every like a firework.Luckily the driver and instructor were ok.

]]> http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/comment-page-1/#comment-136 Alex M Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:07:54 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/27/#comment-136 I was in the jungle.While I was there, I heard an earsplitting roar.When I looked right, I saw nothing.But when I looked left, I was staring at a humunguos lion.He heard something and turned around.It pounced on a rabbit and walked away with its lifeless carcass sitting in his mouth.I never saw the beast again. I was in the jungle.While I was there, I heard an earsplitting roar.When I looked right, I saw nothing.But when I looked left, I was staring at a humunguos lion.He heard something and turned around.It pounced on a rabbit and walked away with its lifeless carcass sitting in his mouth.I never saw the beast again.

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