Comments on: “A Scientific Mishap” http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/ A Place for Student Writers to Publish Writing that was Inspired at WritingFix Mon, 02 Nov 2009 19:01:48 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Josh Bezzant-Fourth Grader http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-155 Josh Bezzant-Fourth Grader Thu, 29 Jan 2009 04:29:01 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-155 Josh Bezzant 12/16/08 Writing Bearded Dragon on the Loose! I ran into my lab after school, leaving my duplicate to do my homework. I rushed into the largest drainpipe, and opened the steel lab door. I walked in slowly so I wouldn’t look like I was in a hurry, or else my assistant, a clumsy fox, would copy me, and be in a hurry to do things. Under my arm I carried my grown bearded dragon into the lab. “Josh! I can’t do this, I just can’t!” my assistant screeched. When I walked in my assistant and I bumped. I dropped my lizard, he dropped a potion that fell on my lizard. “Um, Josh.” My assistant stammered, “That was a dragon potion.” “That was a what!” I yelled, but too late. Inside a golden grass covered hillside, under a store, and under ground, in a bright lab that was whirring with sounds, a new creature was created. I was coming around. Slowly, but painfully I sat up. The lab was ruined. Carts were over turned, potions in their see through metal cases were scattered everywhere, half the lab was burned, and my assistant was half-dead. My memory was mostly blacked out, but was coming back. I started falling asleep, and in my dreams I saw the incident. Rrrr! Hissss! My bearded dragon was fighting itself, until the dragon side beat the lizard side. The Bearded dragon jumped onto me, and bit my neck, it swung its tail and knocked the air out of me. My assistant ran to assist me in getting it off me, but immediately was attacked. I ran to help him, but the dragon swung its rock hard tail, and sent me head over heels into a cart. The last thing I saw in my dream, before I blacked out was the Bearded dragon baring its teeth at me, and then the two foot dragon melted the steel door. Bang! I awoke to seeing my assistant running into a cabinet. When I tried to stand I immediately fell back down, due to the cuts and bruises covering me. My assistant looked at me dumbly, and I could tell he was scared to die. I decided I’d tell him what happened, and what would heal him. After I finished telling him the story, he stammered, “Th- th- that’s n-not all. It-it had wings a- a- and f- fangs and s-spikes.” After my assistant and I bandaged each other, we put a healing potion on, and felt good as new, just the problem was, we were new as in babies! I crawled over to a growth potion, and sipped it as did my assistant. Instantly I grew to the age twenty, but my assistant grew back to his normal self, or else he would’ve died. “This will have to do.” I said in a voice that was strange and new to me. We walked out of the disguised lab, and instantly spotted the problem, burning and melting buildings. We ran to the area where it was happening, and instantly saw that chaos reigned. People were screaming and yelling, people who had been attacked were limping and falling over and sizzling sounds mixed with the crackle of fire dominated many sounds. I heard a scream of dismay behind me and I looked. My assistant was being lifted into the air by the Bearded dragon! Then, I heard a yelp, and my assistant landed on me. I fell over by the impact, and saw the Bearded dragon dive – bombing towards me. I thought quickly and rolled over, but the dragon just changed its course. I lifted my unconscious assistant onto my shoulders, and ran. I never looked back, because I feared if I did I’d trip, or run into something. Then, the Bearded dragon zoomed by over head, causing cold wind to fly back at me, then I saw what the dragon was headed for, Petsmart. When I got to Petsmart, it was obvious the dragon was there, bird screeches and squawks rent the air as did roars, hisses, people screaming, and squeals. Not only that, but it was also easy to hear and see the building creaking and swaying. Petsmart workers were fleeing out of the store followed by a smiling Bearded dragon with his cheeks puffed up with … pebbles? Then, I saw them, crickets. I ran still carrying my assistant on my shoulders past the dragon, and into the destroyed Petsmart. I spied the cricket cage, and ran over to it. There were still twenty crickets, that was all I needed. I half walked half ran to the doorway that was missing a door, ready to take care of the dragon a different way anybody else would’ve. Right after I walked out, I noticed the dragon was missing. I slowly walked a bit farther from the door, and then … Bang! The dragon hit me like a lightning bolt out of the blue. I fell face down on the street, but that wasn’t my only pain, I had been bitten on a vein and I was gradually passing out, until I was bitten on my leg. I kicked out, but was not rewarded by a sound. Thwack! The Bearded dragon hit my spine, and pain surged through my body at lightning speed. I said in a hoarse, but what I believed a soothing voice to the dragon, “Carl. Carl, you are my own dragon. You need to fight your evil side and save yourself.” Right after I finished speaking I rolled over slowly, and five feet away from me, Carl was attacking himself. I thought his name as a pet triggered him into trying to be a good dragon, so once again he could be a normal pet. I crouched over, and stroked him on his thrashing head. Instantly he calmed down, and crawled towards me. I stayed where I was. I got the reaction I wanted he rubbed himself against me. Carl, my pet was back. I picked Carl up, and started to run to my lab, but remembered my assistant. I walked to where he was laying once again half- dead. I put him on my shoulders again, and left the destroyed and deserted Petsmart. Once I got to the lab I gave Carl a taming potion, he immediately curled up and slept on the experiment table. After that I drank a potion that made me my regular age again. I also gave my assistant a healing potion to heal him. I’m glad Carl was regular again, or else he would’ve destroyed the city worse then what he did in the beginning. I’ve decided I’d tell my assistant why I’d brought Carl into the lab. It was because I’d turn him into a dragon, just I’d have given him the taming potion at the same time I gave him the dragon potion. Josh Bezzant
12/16/08
Writing

Bearded Dragon on the Loose!

I ran into my lab after school, leaving my duplicate to do my homework. I rushed into the largest drainpipe, and opened the steel lab door. I walked in slowly so I wouldn’t look like I was in a hurry, or else my assistant, a clumsy fox, would copy me, and be in a hurry to do things. Under my arm I carried my grown bearded dragon into the lab. “Josh! I can’t do this, I just can’t!” my assistant screeched. When I walked in my assistant and I bumped. I dropped my lizard, he dropped a potion that fell on my lizard. “Um, Josh.” My assistant stammered, “That was a dragon potion.” “That was a what!” I yelled, but too late. Inside a golden grass covered hillside, under a store, and under ground, in a bright lab that was whirring with sounds, a new creature was created.

I was coming around. Slowly, but painfully I sat up. The lab was ruined. Carts were over turned, potions in their see through metal cases were scattered everywhere, half the lab was burned, and my assistant was half-dead. My memory was mostly blacked out, but was coming back. I started falling asleep, and in my dreams I saw the incident. Rrrr! Hissss! My bearded dragon was fighting itself, until the dragon side beat the lizard side. The Bearded dragon jumped onto me, and bit my neck, it swung its tail and knocked the air out of me. My assistant ran to assist me in getting it off me, but immediately was attacked. I ran to help him, but the dragon swung its rock hard tail, and sent me head over heels into a cart. The last thing I saw in my dream, before I blacked out was the Bearded dragon baring its teeth at me, and then the two foot dragon melted the steel door. Bang! I awoke to seeing my assistant running into a cabinet. When I tried to stand I immediately fell back down, due to the cuts and bruises covering me. My assistant looked at me dumbly, and I could tell he was scared to die. I decided I’d tell him what happened, and what would heal him. After I finished telling him the story, he stammered, “Th- th- that’s n-not all. It-it had wings a- a- and f- fangs and s-spikes.”

After my assistant and I bandaged each other, we put a healing potion on, and felt good as new, just the problem was, we were new as in babies! I crawled over to a growth potion, and sipped it as did my assistant. Instantly I grew to the age twenty, but my assistant grew back to his normal self, or else he would’ve died. “This will have to do.” I said in a voice that was strange and new to me. We walked out of the disguised lab, and instantly spotted the problem, burning and melting buildings. We ran to the area where it was happening, and instantly saw that chaos reigned. People were screaming and yelling, people who had been attacked were limping and falling over and sizzling sounds mixed with the crackle of fire dominated many sounds. I heard a scream of dismay behind me and I looked. My assistant was being lifted into the air by the Bearded dragon! Then, I heard a yelp, and my assistant landed on me. I fell over by the impact, and saw the Bearded dragon dive – bombing towards me. I thought quickly and rolled over, but the dragon just changed its course. I lifted my unconscious assistant onto my shoulders, and ran. I never looked back, because I feared if I did I’d trip, or run into something. Then, the Bearded dragon zoomed by over head, causing cold wind to fly back at me, then I saw what the dragon was headed for, Petsmart. When I got to Petsmart, it was obvious the dragon was there, bird screeches and squawks rent the air as did roars, hisses, people screaming, and squeals. Not only that, but it was also easy to hear and see the building creaking and swaying. Petsmart workers were fleeing out of the store followed by a smiling Bearded dragon with his cheeks puffed up with … pebbles? Then, I saw them, crickets. I ran still carrying my assistant on my shoulders past the dragon, and into the destroyed Petsmart. I spied the cricket cage, and ran over to it. There were still twenty crickets, that was all I needed. I half walked half ran to the doorway that was missing a door, ready to take care of the dragon a different way anybody else would’ve. Right after I walked out, I noticed the dragon was missing. I slowly walked a bit farther from the door, and then … Bang! The dragon hit me like a lightning bolt out of the blue. I fell face down on the street, but that wasn’t my only pain, I had been bitten on a vein and I was gradually passing out, until I was bitten on my leg. I kicked out, but was not rewarded by a sound. Thwack! The Bearded dragon hit my spine, and pain surged through my body at lightning speed. I said in a hoarse, but what I believed a soothing voice to the dragon, “Carl. Carl, you are my own dragon. You need to fight your evil side and save yourself.” Right after I finished speaking I rolled over slowly, and five feet away from me, Carl was attacking himself. I thought his name as a pet triggered him into trying to be a good dragon, so once again he could be a normal pet. I crouched over, and stroked him on his thrashing head. Instantly he calmed down, and crawled towards me. I stayed where I was. I got the reaction I wanted he rubbed himself against me. Carl, my pet was back.

I picked Carl up, and started to run to my lab, but remembered my assistant. I walked to where he was laying once again half- dead. I put him on my shoulders again, and left the destroyed and deserted Petsmart. Once I got to the lab I gave Carl a taming potion, he immediately curled up and slept on the experiment table. After that I drank a potion that made me my regular age again. I also gave my assistant a healing potion to heal him.

I’m glad Carl was regular again, or else he would’ve destroyed the city worse then what he did in the beginning. I’ve decided I’d tell my assistant why I’d brought Carl into the lab. It was because I’d turn him into a dragon, just I’d have given him the taming potion at the same time I gave him the dragon potion.

]]> By: Chance 6th grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-83 Chance 6th grade Thu, 28 Feb 2008 15:01:20 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-83 Double O Dolphin Hi my name is 00dolfin.im half 007 and half dolphin. My ex-name is 007. I soused to work for MI6.When I turned to 00dolfin I was fired and thrown out on the streets. Soon I became a well known cop, then from there I worked my way up and was offered to join a super secret classified service that I don't even know the true name of it to protect its identate. Now I will tell you why I became 00dolphin. I had just put Darth monkey in prison. He was wanted in over 73 countries for kidnapping for ransom. I went back to my lab/ home. When I got there my private scientist showed me all his new inventions. About 2 hours later I thought he was finally done, but the man make so much stuff I don't even have time to use it, so of course he had to show me one more thing.”I call it Bindomimorphea.”After 10 minits of being explained to I just walked away, then I herd barking, I turned around and my scientist was was about to morph my dog and and dolphin on brain ehancers.Intinktivly I ran to save my dog,i dived and pulled my dog from the dolphin. I saved him but un-instinctively I went into the solution of Bindomimorphea.I started to hear crash,crash,bang,and started seeing flashes of suddenly I was knocked out.When I woke up I noticed I had fins for hands. I was long,Grey and a shiny sleek body. I was a 00dolphin. All of a sudden I started flipping on the ground like a fish out of water. I practically was but I was able to breath because of my half lungs half gills that also let me breath and swim under water.I was able to swim under cover,talk to other fish,etc.Thats how I became a 00dolphin. Double O Dolphin
Hi my name is 00dolfin.im half 007 and half dolphin. My ex-name is 007. I soused to work for MI6.When I turned to 00dolfin I was fired and thrown out on the streets. Soon I became a well known cop, then from there I worked my way up and was offered to join a super secret classified service that I don’t even know the true name of it to protect its identate. Now I will tell you why I became 00dolphin.
I had just put Darth monkey in prison. He was wanted in over 73 countries for kidnapping for ransom. I went back to my lab/ home. When I got there my private scientist showed me all his new inventions. About 2 hours later I thought he was finally done, but the man make so much stuff I don’t even have time to use it, so of course he had to show me one more thing.”I call it Bindomimorphea.”After 10 minits of being explained to I just walked away, then I herd barking, I turned around and my scientist was was about to morph my dog and and dolphin on brain ehancers.Intinktivly I ran to save my dog,i dived and pulled my dog from the dolphin. I saved him but un-instinctively I went into the solution of Bindomimorphea.I started to hear crash,crash,bang,and started seeing flashes of suddenly I was knocked out.When I woke up I noticed I had fins for hands. I was long,Grey and a shiny sleek body. I was a 00dolphin.
All of a sudden I started flipping on the ground like a fish out of water. I practically was but I was able to breath because of my half lungs half gills that also let me breath and swim under water.I was able to swim under cover,talk to other fish,etc.Thats how I became a 00dolphin.

]]> By: Chance 6th grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-82 Chance 6th grade Thu, 28 Feb 2008 14:53:29 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-82 Hi my name is 00dolfin.im half 007 and half dolphin. My ex-name is 007. I soused to work for MI6.When I turned to 00dolfin I was fired and thrown out on the streets. Soon I became a well known cop, then from there I worked my way up and was offered to join a super secret classified service that I don't even know the true name of it to protect its identate. Now I will tell you why I became 00dolphin. I had just put Darth monkey in prison. He was wanted in over 73 countries for kidnapping for ransom. I went back to my lab/ home. When I got there my private scientist showed me all his new inventions. About 2 hours later I thought he was finally done, but the man make so much stuff I don't even have time to use it, so of course he had to show me one more thing.”I call it Bindomimorphea.”After 10 minits of being explained to I just walked away, then I herd barking, I turned around and my scientist was was about to morph my dog and and dolphin on brain ehancers.Intinktivly I ran to save my dog,i dived and pulled my dog from the dolphin. I saved him but un-instinctively I went into the solution of Bindomimorphea.I started to hear crash,crash,bang,and started seeing flashes of suddenly I was knocked out.When I woke up I noticed I had fins for hands. I was long,Grey and a shiny sleek body. I was a 00dolphin. All of a sudden I started flipping on the ground like a fish out of water. I practically was but I was able to breath because of my half lungs half gills that also let me breath and swim under water.I was able to swim under cover,talk to other fish,etc.Thats how I became a 00dolphin. Hi my name is 00dolfin.im half 007 and half dolphin. My ex-name is 007. I soused to work for MI6.When I turned to 00dolfin I was fired and thrown out on the streets. Soon I became a well known cop, then from there I worked my way up and was offered to join a super secret classified service that I don’t even know the true name of it to protect its identate. Now I will tell you why I became 00dolphin.
I had just put Darth monkey in prison. He was wanted in over 73 countries for kidnapping for ransom. I went back to my lab/ home. When I got there my private scientist showed me all his new inventions. About 2 hours later I thought he was finally done, but the man make so much stuff I don’t even have time to use it, so of course he had to show me one more thing.”I call it Bindomimorphea.”After 10 minits of being explained to I just walked away, then I herd barking, I turned around and my scientist was was about to morph my dog and and dolphin on brain ehancers.Intinktivly I ran to save my dog,i dived and pulled my dog from the dolphin. I saved him but un-instinctively I went into the solution of Bindomimorphea.I started to hear crash,crash,bang,and started seeing flashes of suddenly I was knocked out.When I woke up I noticed I had fins for hands. I was long,Grey and a shiny sleek body. I was a 00dolphin.
All of a sudden I started flipping on the ground like a fish out of water. I practically was but I was able to breath because of my half lungs half gills that also let me breath and swim under water.I was able to swim under cover,talk to other fish,etc.Thats how I became a 00dolphin.

]]> By: Eric 6th grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-81 Eric 6th grade Wed, 27 Feb 2008 17:36:13 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-81 Mosquitiger Along time ago there was a forest ,but not just any forest . This forest had a waterfall with a mad scientist living next to it . Every time the scientist would mess up on an experiment he would throw all the toxic waste in the waterfall , but this night the scientist was working on something huge . He messed up and threw 10 big barrels of toxic waste in the water. The next day there was a big thunderstorm and a mosquito was flying around . The mosquito tried to look for something to eat . Then he found a big tiger by the waterfall , he flew to it and he drove his needle in it and started to suck the blood . A tree fell down and scared the tiger and then he fell in the waterfall with the mosquito still on him. When they came out of the waterfall all the forest creatures ran away. The tiger looked in the water and saw his reflection, was the ugliest thing ever . It was a tiger but with mosquito legs and a needle stuck in his nose. No one liked that thing in the forest so all the forest creatures kicked them out . They went to the city and everyone got scared and ran away. The police came but when the scientists got there they said they would take care of it . So the scientists took it to the lab and tried to think of a name for it. One scientist stood up and said”since it is a mosquito and a tiger we should call it mosquitiger ”. They all agreed. The next day their was a million scientist around the lab asking where it came from and what happened to it. They all found out that it was because a mosquito was biting a tiger and some kind of toxic waste fell on it. They were all thinking of what toxic waste could of done this. That very second the mad scientist from the forest said it might of fallen to the waterfall I live by. Then the scientists thought if they could get a mosquito on a tiger and push the tiger in the waterfall they could get another mosquitiger. So thats exactly what they did. Of course the first 2746 times they tried to do it the tiger got mad and pushed the scientist in the waterfall . Most of the scientists turned into superheroes, but thats a different story. So thats how the mosquitiger story go's. Mosquitiger
Along time ago there was a forest ,but not just any forest . This forest had a waterfall with a mad scientist living next to it . Every time the scientist would mess up on an experiment he would throw all the toxic waste in the waterfall , but this night the scientist was working on something huge . He messed up and threw 10 big barrels of toxic waste in the water.

The next day there was a big thunderstorm and a mosquito was flying around . The mosquito tried to look for something to eat . Then he found a big tiger by the waterfall , he flew to it and he drove his needle in it and started to suck the blood . A tree fell down and scared the tiger and then he fell in the waterfall with the mosquito still on him. When they came out of the waterfall all the forest creatures ran away. The tiger looked in the water and saw his reflection, was the ugliest thing ever . It was a tiger but with mosquito legs and a needle stuck in his nose.

No one liked that thing in the forest so all the forest creatures kicked them out . They went to the city and everyone got scared and ran away. The police came but when the scientists got there they said they would take care of it . So the scientists took it to the lab and tried to think of a name for it. One scientist stood up and said”since it is a mosquito and a tiger we should call it mosquitiger ”. They all agreed. The next day their was a million scientist around the lab asking where it came from and what happened to it.

They all found out that it was because a mosquito was biting a tiger and some kind of toxic waste fell on it. They were all thinking of what toxic waste could of done this. That very second the mad scientist from the forest said it might of fallen to the waterfall I live by. Then the scientists thought if they could get a mosquito on a tiger and push the tiger in the waterfall they could get another mosquitiger. So thats exactly what they did. Of course the first 2746 times they tried to do it the tiger got mad and pushed the scientist in the waterfall . Most of the scientists turned into superheroes, but thats a different story. So thats how the mosquitiger story go’s.

]]> By: Scott 6th grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-80 Scott 6th grade Wed, 27 Feb 2008 17:27:25 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-80 Mouseirilla “Boy it sure is a nice day!” said Mr. Goerge looking at the news paper over a cup of coffee. He does not know that this is his last day on Earth. Mr. Goerge gets in his blue car. On his way to work he stops at a road block. “Sir please step out of the car and go directly home.” Said a policeman, “Hey! I’m the CEO of Blue Pants studio, and I am go…uuhhhh never mind.” As he was saying this a giant mouse was getting closer and closer. He sped out of the way as a 35 ft. foot crashed and squashed the policeman! Mr. Goerge took ou…uuhhhh he just got laser beamed!...RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!! !!BOOM!! “This is ace reporter Thomas live from Salvation City. I’m here with the narrator who has recently been squashed. So Mr. Narrator how did this happen?” “Well Doc. Stupid made a mistake in L4xBxMK an….” “Ok, Mr. Narrator we don’t all that.” “Ok, then well it wrong and …wasn’t it supposed to be a mouse and a guerrilla?” “ HEY IT’S GONE!!!!” Then everybody did the Cha Cha to celebrate (their in Mexico). “AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! A GUERRILLA!” Said a mindless background character. Soon the military arrive with big guns to blow up the guerrilla. “This is CNN ace reporter. Rory here in the city and…….(girly scream). It has the Governor and camera man! Hey maybe he can get some good shots!” Meanwhile Doc. Stupid was working on a formula to fix Mouseirilla. “Servant!” said Doc. Stupid “Get me a D.P. with a brownie I want to eat before I test this formula.” 30 min. later… “Finally I have done something right! Servant take this to General Waxypax now!” The servant did as he was told and due to he natural clumsiness he droped it on Mouseirrilla! Unfortunately he saved the day but he fell into the sewer. I forgot one thing…their all ant!! THE END Mouseirilla

“Boy it sure is a nice day!” said Mr. Goerge looking at the news paper over a cup of coffee. He does not know that this is his last day on Earth. Mr. Goerge gets in his blue car. On his way to work he stops at a road block. “Sir please step out of the car and go directly home.” Said a policeman, “Hey! I’m the CEO of Blue Pants studio, and I am go…uuhhhh never mind.”

As he was saying this a giant mouse was getting closer and closer. He sped out of the way as a 35 ft. foot crashed and squashed the policeman! Mr. Goerge took ou…uuhhhh he just got laser beamed!…RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!! !!BOOM!!

“This is ace reporter Thomas live from Salvation City. I’m here with the narrator who has recently been squashed. So Mr. Narrator how did this happen?” “Well Doc. Stupid made a mistake in L4xBxMK an….” “Ok, Mr. Narrator we don’t all that.” “Ok, then well it wrong and …wasn’t it supposed to be a mouse and a guerrilla?” “ HEY IT’S GONE!!!!” Then everybody did the Cha Cha to celebrate (their in Mexico).

“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! A GUERRILLA!” Said a mindless background character. Soon the military arrive with big guns to blow up the guerrilla. “This is CNN ace reporter. Rory here in the city and…….(girly scream). It has the
Governor and camera man! Hey maybe he can get some good shots!”

Meanwhile Doc. Stupid was working on a formula to fix Mouseirilla. “Servant!” said Doc. Stupid “Get me a D.P. with a brownie I want to eat before I test this formula.” 30 min. later… “Finally I have done something right! Servant take this to General Waxypax now!” The servant did as he was told and due to he natural clumsiness he droped it on Mouseirrilla! Unfortunately he saved the day but he fell into the sewer. I forgot one thing…their all ant!!

THE END

]]> By: Caroline 6th grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-79 Caroline 6th grade Wed, 27 Feb 2008 14:57:05 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-79 Squirrelman One day in my lab my father and I were working on a top secret project. We were trying to turn animals in to a human. “ Dad get the animal.” I said. My dad got animal , but it got lose and knocked over all the beakers. “ Dad watch out.” I said looking so scared that it would hurt him. “ Help me.” said dad. I went over there to help , I was to late the animal knocked over a very important chemical on my dad. “ HHHHEEEELLLLPPPP!!!!!!!.” Yelled dad while the liquid burned into his flesh. I was so scared I couldn't move I was frozen watching my dad being burned by the chemical. He yelled so loud the whole city could hear him. After the burning stoped he turned brown with thick hair. He had brown eyes and a tail. I ran to the beaker it was label X-squirrel. He was still a man , but half squirrel. He was like a squirrelman. “ sniff sniff .” squirrelman did. I stood up , but he knocked me down hard. I got up again. Before he ran I strapped him down. As he was strapped down I ran to the shelf with the very dangerous chemicals . “where is it , come on.” I said realizing it was the antidote was the project I was working on. It was right next to squirrelman and he had already broken a strap. I ran to the chemical and got it. I poured the chemical on squirrelman and turned back into my dad. While this was happening a little drop of it got on me. “oh no.”!!!! Squirrelman One day in my lab my father and I were working on a top secret project. We were trying to turn animals in to a human. “ Dad get the animal.” I said. My dad got animal , but it got lose and knocked over all the beakers. “ Dad watch out.” I said looking so scared that it would hurt him. “ Help me.” said dad. I went over there to help , I was to late the animal knocked over a very important chemical on my dad.
“ HHHHEEEELLLLPPPP!!!!!!!.” Yelled dad while the liquid burned into his flesh. I was so scared I couldn’t move I was frozen watching my dad being burned by the chemical. He yelled so loud the whole city could hear him. After the burning stoped he turned brown with thick hair. He had brown eyes and a tail. I ran to the beaker it was label X-squirrel. He was still a man , but half squirrel. He was like a squirrelman. “ sniff sniff .” squirrelman did. I stood up , but he knocked me down hard.
I got up again. Before he ran I strapped him down. As he was strapped down I ran to the shelf with the very dangerous chemicals . “where is it , come on.” I said realizing it was the antidote was the project I was working on. It was right next to squirrelman and he had already broken a strap. I ran to the chemical and got it. I poured the chemical on squirrelman and turned back into my dad. While this was happening a little drop of it got on me. “oh no.”!!!!

]]> By: Shuntez 6 grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-76 Shuntez 6 grade Tue, 26 Feb 2008 20:30:27 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-76 We were at my best budd's house, Dexter's house, Friday night working on a science experiment for the Science Fair, in Dexter's secret laboratory. We had to pick partners in class, and Dexter chose me, Albert Einstein, to be his partner.We were the smartest people in class, and everyone was looking forward to seeing our project. Dexter and I were going to build a ray that could scramble the atoms and cells of your DNA. The guide lines for the Sceince Fair were to: 1. Build an object. 2.Make sure it could work. 3Enter the object into the science fair. -A day and 3 hours later- Dexter is yelling for me to get to work, and so we will have the science experiment ready,and we can start working the board pronto. Now it is 8:30p.m., and we are almost done, but all we have to do is add the finishing touches, and we have to test it. Now it is about 10:05p.m., and we are done. Later we going to go looking for something that we could attach, or combine, so finally we thought at the same time, why not attach ourselves together. Later we try to find a vollenteer to activate the contraption. I think why not Dede ( Dexter's sister) , but Dexter thinks his dad. So we go get his dad. Finally we cought up to him before he left to go to the store. We asked him if he could help us with the project, but he really needs to get some groceries, so we go to Phenias and Ferb's house to asked them if they could activate the machine. They then came quickly to Dexter's house and into his laboratory. It's go time! Phenias and Ferb flipped the switch. Boom, Bam, Boom, Bipity, Bopity, Boo. The contraption worked. Phenias and Ferb were so proud of us, thought we would win the Science Fair. -A week later- The Science Fair! We had to go to the school auditorium because that is were the Science Fair was held. Dexter and I were setting up our equipment when we saw Josh Nickels and Mendy Crincha setting up their equipment, that was about the history of rays. About twenty minutes later it was time to present. Everyone was so amazed with our project that they didn't even pay attention to Josh's and Mendy's project.We were going to win. Everyone was estatic about our project.The judges did award us the blue ribbon! We proved ourselves worthy. Everyone loved our project. This was our moment until Josh said how are you going to unattach yourselves. We said with the help of Phenias and Ferb. We were at my best budd’s house, Dexter’s house, Friday night working on a science experiment for the Science Fair, in Dexter’s secret laboratory. We had to pick partners in class, and Dexter chose me, Albert Einstein, to be his partner.We were the smartest people in class, and everyone was looking forward to seeing our project. Dexter and I were going to build a ray that could scramble the atoms and cells of your DNA. The guide lines for the Sceince Fair were to:

1. Build an object.
2.Make sure it could work.
3Enter the object into the science fair.

-A day and 3 hours later-

Dexter is yelling for me to get to work, and so we will have the science experiment ready,and we can start working the board pronto. Now it is 8:30p.m., and we are almost done, but all we have to do is add the finishing touches, and we have to test it. Now it is about 10:05p.m., and we are done. Later we going to go looking for something that we could attach, or combine, so finally we thought at the same time, why not attach ourselves together. Later we try to find a vollenteer to activate the contraption. I think why not Dede ( Dexter’s sister) , but Dexter thinks his dad. So we go get his dad.

Finally we cought up to him before he left to go to the store. We asked him if he could help us with the project, but he really needs to get some groceries, so we go to Phenias and Ferb’s house to asked them if they could activate the machine. They then came quickly to Dexter’s house and into his laboratory. It’s go time! Phenias and Ferb flipped the switch. Boom, Bam, Boom, Bipity, Bopity, Boo. The contraption worked. Phenias and Ferb were so proud of us, thought we would win the Science Fair.

-A week later-

The Science Fair! We had to go to the school auditorium because that is were the Science Fair was held. Dexter and I were setting up our equipment when we saw Josh Nickels and Mendy Crincha setting up their equipment, that was about the history of rays. About twenty minutes later it was time to present. Everyone was so amazed with our project that they didn’t even pay attention to Josh’s and Mendy’s project.We were going to win. Everyone was estatic about our project.The judges did award us the blue ribbon! We proved ourselves worthy. Everyone loved our project. This was our moment until Josh said how are you going to unattach yourselves. We said with the help of Phenias and Ferb.

]]> By: Brett Sixth grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-75 Brett Sixth grade Tue, 26 Feb 2008 20:28:47 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-75 Tiger-Man Hi I'm Brett people call me Mike though. Don't ask why because I have no idea why. I 'm a tiger-man half tiger half man. More like two thirds tiger one third man. All I can do is talk everything else is tiger. Your probably wondering why I'm a tiger-man. Well it's a long story. It all started in second grade this kid Ethan (yea I know what kind of name is Ethan). I took his cookie and he's hated me ever since. Lets fast forward, I'm walking to the ice cream man. I'm going to order my twisty cone you know the one with sponge bob dora pants on it. Then Ethan pops out of nowhere and screams,“I told you not to,” trying to sound all evil. I thought to myself what is this the 37th time he has tried to attack me. “I said Ethan what are you doing?” “Turning you into a tiger man.” “Yea right, last time it was a giraffe, the time before that a platypus, and the time before that an elephant mixed with a wild buffalo!” “You are the craziest person in the world.” “At least I dont steal cookies!” “It didn't even taste good.”But I like the cookie.” After that I just shook my head and walked away. Then he pulls out this ray gun thing and shoots me and I passed out, I mean it really did something to me! When I woke up I was in a box, yea a box. Still open though and felt kind of funny I tried to get up and I got shot with a tranquilizer gun. I looked at my hand where I got shoot and I saw a paw! Next thing I know I'm in this very large cage thing with bushes and a ponds. I look around and their's people looking at me calling me Mike ( no idea why),and saying look, look little Jimmy look at the tiger. I went over to the pond and I looked at it and in the reflection I saw a Tiger! Well what do you know he did turn me into a tiger-man. The people treat me like a king they feed me, care for me,and they sometimes even take me to football games! The people also admire me, it seems like everybody wants to be me, witch does not surprise me. I have this big building behind me and on the windows is a picture of me. I still had no idea where I was. So one day this kid walks by, I think his name was Brett too. Anyway I look at his shirt and it had a big LSU on it. Ethan probably thinks he won. Really I did because it's awesome here. Except it's really loud on Saturday. Its probably a bunch college kids. It's the best here at LSU Anyway I just have one more problem why do they call me Mike? Tiger-Man

Hi I’m Brett people call me Mike though. Don’t ask why because I have no idea why. I ‘m a tiger-man half tiger half man. More like two thirds tiger one third man. All I can do is talk everything else is tiger. Your probably wondering why I’m a tiger-man. Well it’s a long story.

It all started in second grade this kid Ethan (yea I know what kind of name is Ethan). I took his cookie and he’s hated me ever since. Lets fast forward, I’m walking to the ice cream man. I’m going to order my twisty cone you know the one with sponge bob dora pants on it. Then Ethan pops out of nowhere and screams,“I told you not to,” trying to sound all evil. I thought to myself what is this the 37th time he has tried to attack me. “I said Ethan what are you doing?” “Turning you into a tiger man.” “Yea right, last time it was a giraffe, the time before that a platypus, and the time before that an elephant mixed with a wild buffalo!” “You are the craziest person in the world.” “At least I dont steal cookies!” “It didn’t even taste good.”But I like the cookie.” After that I just shook my head and walked away. Then he pulls out this ray gun thing and shoots me and I passed out, I mean it really did something to me! When I woke up I was in a box, yea a box. Still open though and felt kind of funny I tried to get up and I got shot with a tranquilizer gun. I looked at my hand where I got shoot and I saw a paw!

Next thing I know I’m in this very large cage thing with bushes and a ponds. I look around and their’s people looking at me calling me Mike ( no idea why),and saying look, look little Jimmy look at the tiger. I went over to the pond and I looked at it and in the reflection I saw a Tiger! Well what do you know he did turn me into a tiger-man.

The people treat me like a king they feed me, care for me,and they sometimes even take me to football games! The people also admire me, it seems like everybody wants to be me, witch does not surprise me. I have this big building behind me and on the windows is a picture of me. I still had no idea where I was. So one day this kid walks
by, I think his name was Brett too. Anyway I look at his shirt and it had a big LSU on it.

Ethan probably thinks he won. Really I did because it’s awesome here. Except it’s really loud on Saturday. Its probably a bunch college kids. It’s the best here at LSU Anyway I just have one more
problem why do they call me Mike?

]]> By: Sarah 6th grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-74 Sarah 6th grade Tue, 26 Feb 2008 20:22:09 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-74 Togurtle One day when I was in my lab mixing a together poshion. I had my test subjects a turtle and dog in their cages. They were watching me to mix my poshion and I knew I had to be careful. The floor was really wet and I slioed and let my animals out of their cages. Then I spiled my together poshion all over the floor. I watched as my dog and turtle form together. My new animal had a turtles body and a dogs head. I was a little scared of my animal at first becauce of the way it looked. Then I found out my animal was really sweet. I then couldn't wait to run some test test on my new animal. I found out my animal could bark like a dog but it was really slow like a turtle. I then spent some time looking for more animals to put together. I also spent some time looking for a way to meke them two different animals again. I had so much fun that day. I will never forget the day my turtle and dog came together to form a togurtle. Togurtle
One day when I was in my lab mixing a together poshion. I had my test subjects a turtle and dog in their cages. They were watching me to mix my poshion and I knew I had to be careful. The floor was really wet and I slioed and let my animals out of their cages. Then I spiled my together poshion all over the floor.

I watched as my dog and turtle form together. My new animal had a turtles body and a dogs head. I was a little scared of my animal at first becauce of the way it looked. Then I found out my animal was really sweet. I then couldn’t wait to run some test test on my new animal. I found out my animal could bark like a dog but it was really slow like a turtle.

I then spent some time looking for more animals to put together. I also spent some time looking for a way to meke them two different animals again. I had so much fun that day. I will never forget the day my turtle and dog came together to form a togurtle.

]]> By: Francis 6 grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/comment-page-1/#comment-73 Francis 6 grade Tue, 26 Feb 2008 20:21:11 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/a-scientific-mishap/#comment-73 Sponge Bob and Patrick Fairly Pants One day Sponge Bob and Patrick were going to the carnival, so Sponge Bob used his magic powers to get there faster when they were there Sponge Bob was so exited to get on the roller coster, so Sponge Bob said why don’t you come and ride it with me Patrick? But Patrick started running around and screaming NOOOOO!!!!!! NOT AGAIN, what happen Patrick? Last time I rode a roller coster I lost my best friend. Who was your best friend? My fairly Blanky Pants. Then Sponge Bob Fairly Pants went home crying, because he thought he was Patrick’s best friend. Then Sponge Bob took the Fairly BFF ring and he was about to disappear the ring for ever, but Patrick Fairly Pants came and said you are my best friend now because I don’t have Blanky any more. Now they decided to be best friends again so they went to the carnival again, but it started raining so Patrick slipped and Blanky came out of Patrick’s pocket, when Patrick saw his best friend back he left and started all over again. Sponge Bob and Patrick Fairly Pants

One day Sponge Bob and Patrick were going to the carnival, so Sponge Bob used his magic powers to get there faster when they were there Sponge Bob was so exited to get on the roller coster, so Sponge Bob said why don’t you come and ride it with me Patrick? But Patrick started running around and screaming NOOOOO!!!!!! NOT AGAIN, what happen Patrick? Last time I rode a roller coster I lost my best friend. Who was your best friend? My fairly Blanky Pants.

Then Sponge Bob Fairly Pants went home crying, because he thought he was Patrick’s best friend. Then Sponge Bob took the Fairly BFF ring and he was about to disappear the ring for ever, but Patrick Fairly Pants came and said you are my best friend now because I don’t have Blanky any more.

Now they decided to be best friends again so they went to the carnival again, but it started raining so Patrick slipped and Blanky came out of Patrick’s pocket, when Patrick saw his best friend back he left and started all over again.

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