Comments on: “Three-Meal Weather” http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/ A Place for Student Writers to Publish Writing that was Inspired at WritingFix Sat, 19 Jun 2010 00:18:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Alex http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/comment-page-1/#comment-443 Alex Tue, 08 Jun 2010 15:39:12 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/#comment-443 iecAppatiteotropolis By Alexander In the middle of the Dessert Desert on planet food pyramid is the small city of Appatiteotropolis which was the richest town in the desert because people don’t have to pay for food, they had all the food they needed fell from the sky. The city has food storms three times a day every day. In the morning during breakfast mouth watering bacon falls from the sky with some spicy sausages and a side of chewy hot dogs and later a rain shower of orange juice. During rush hour, lunch is a creamy milkshake shower with gigantic clouds of cheese-burgers the size of Mount Everest and a hail the size of French fries, actually they were French fries. During the night there is a shower of milk, chicken wings, juicy hot dogs and meaty steak. And for desert there was an after-dinner rain of Oreos, creamy ice cream and a drizzle of fizzy coca cola. Then everyone goes to bed to start the day all over again. But the planet pyramid is too far away from earth for people to travel to. But one day in the future maybe humans might be able to travel there for an everlasting feast. iecAppatiteotropolis
By Alexander

In the middle of the Dessert Desert on planet food pyramid is the small city of Appatiteotropolis which was the richest town in the desert because people don’t have to pay for food, they had all the food they needed fell from the sky. The city has food storms three times a day every day.

In the morning during breakfast mouth watering bacon falls from the sky with some spicy sausages and a side of chewy hot dogs and later a rain shower of orange juice.
During rush hour, lunch is a creamy milkshake shower with gigantic clouds of cheese-burgers the size of Mount Everest and a hail the size of French fries, actually they were French fries.

During the night there is a shower of milk, chicken wings, juicy hot dogs and meaty steak. And for desert there was an after-dinner rain of Oreos, creamy ice cream and a drizzle of fizzy coca cola. Then everyone goes to bed to start the day all over again.

But the planet pyramid is too far away from earth for people to travel to. But one day in the future maybe humans might be able to travel there for an everlasting feast.

]]> By: Holly Baker- 2nd Grade http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/comment-page-1/#comment-208 Holly Baker- 2nd Grade Tue, 19 May 2009 14:53:06 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/#comment-208 Cloudy with a Chance of Fish At 10:00 in the town of Crazy Weather, there was a tornado of crucncy bacon. Then there was a hurricane of fried eggs. There was a sudden storm of thick, sweet pancakes. There was almost 10,000. At exactly 1:00, there was a blizzard of cruncy apples, followed by a flood of fantastic fish! A fog of creamy chocolate milk washed it away. It almost flooded the town! For dinner at 9:00 an earthquake sent an ice storm of cold spagetti. Which was followed by a tsunami of sour milkshakes. Then we had a fog of moldy pizza. What a dinner it was. We thought about it and decided to dessert our town. No one ever went back there again! Cloudy with a Chance of Fish
At 10:00 in the town of Crazy Weather, there was a tornado of crucncy bacon. Then there was a hurricane of fried eggs. There was a sudden storm of thick, sweet pancakes. There was almost 10,000.
At exactly 1:00, there was a blizzard of cruncy apples, followed by a flood of fantastic fish! A fog of creamy chocolate milk washed it away. It almost flooded the town!
For dinner at 9:00 an earthquake sent an ice storm of cold spagetti. Which was followed by a tsunami of sour milkshakes. Then we had a fog of moldy pizza. What a dinner it was. We thought about it and decided to dessert our town. No one ever went back there again!

]]> By: Atalya Santos http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/comment-page-1/#comment-101 Atalya Santos Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:25:56 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2007/12/14/three-meal-weather/#comment-101 "Hey look over there."My pityfull friend Jaimy called."Look Grammy we are having our second crunchy hash brown hail storm." He called out once more to his annoyed grandmother. Then the weather brought us a frosted flaked cereal flood. Jaimy was so full of excitement about the delicious food weather and dashed right out the front door and right when he was about to step out a gigantic pancake landed right on him followed by very sticky syrup. Finally when the breakfast hurricane was over it was already time for lunch. Guess what the weather brought us? Thick macaroni and cheese,crispy french fries, and flaming spicy chicken wings. But at the same time our food formed a colossal tornado while grease from the french fries turned in to greasy rain. At last it was time for dinner and all the people from Foodtopia were gathered in the Town Square hoping that their dinner will not be one to evacuate on, because lunch and breakfast were both huge storms. But turns out that the weather seemed do be very swift and soft and the food came down gently from the sky. Our meal was thick juicy steak, white rice and black beans. Every one in our town was eating very happily. I saw them grabbing,nibbling,swallowing and biting . Finally my town and I are enjoying our dinner. “Hey look over there.”My pityfull friend Jaimy called.”Look Grammy we are having our second crunchy hash brown hail storm.” He called out once more to his annoyed grandmother. Then the weather brought us a frosted flaked cereal flood. Jaimy was so full of excitement about the delicious food weather and dashed right out the front door and right when he was about to step out a gigantic pancake landed right on him followed by very sticky syrup. Finally when the breakfast hurricane was over it was already time for lunch.
Guess what the weather brought us? Thick macaroni and cheese,crispy french fries, and flaming spicy chicken wings. But at the same time our food formed a colossal tornado while grease from the french fries turned in to greasy rain.
At last it was time for dinner and all the people from Foodtopia were gathered in the Town Square hoping that their dinner will not be one to evacuate on, because lunch and breakfast were both huge storms. But turns out that the weather seemed do be very swift and soft and the food came down gently from the sky. Our meal was thick juicy steak, white rice and black beans. Every one in our town was eating very happily. I saw them grabbing,nibbling,swallowing and biting . Finally my town and I are enjoying our dinner.

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