“Silly Animal Problems” Prompt
WritingFix has a fun lesson–called “Silly Animal Problems“ –that was inspired by the picture book Dog Breath by Dav Pilkey.
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March 27th, 2008 at 6:01 am
Wennie the Wenner dog/there once was a family called the Hot Dog family with a dog,and you know what everybody says every family has a problem.His name was aweinnie the Wenner dog ,and he loved hot dog buns.he would beg and beg until he got a hot dog bun.The reason why he didn’t need a weinnie beacause he was a Wenner dog! But one day he’ll learn.They tried three things but none of them worked.The first thing they tried was the greatest hamberger in the world…. but the burger failed.The second thing they tried was trying to take his mind off of it with playing sports…but it failed to.They even tried jogging…but it failed again.One day he’ll learn.Ithink he just did!Ah! I ate the dog.,
March 27th, 2008 at 6:02 am
Tom The Skeeter/ Tom is a skeeter. He likes blood.H elives with the Buzz family. His problem is he buzzes to much. He annoys everone. The Buzz famliy try four things to stop the buzzing. First they put him in a box with tiny holes in it.They drive around the city crazy.But that didn,t work.The next thing that the Buzz family did was. They put Tom with Jill.She is a vet. She works with all kinds of animals. They put them into a room and tom went crazy.Tom bit Jill on the leg. Jill opened the door an lrt Tom out. That didn,t help eaither. Finally the Buzz family had one more trick. The owner Tom knew a friend. His name is Dice. Dice lock Tom in a safe. Dice went to sleep but he coudn’t go to sleep. Tom wouldn’t stop buzzing. Dice gave up and let him go. The Buzz family never got success. They a gaurd animal do. The Buzz family had a sign that said Beware of noise.
March 27th, 2008 at 11:17 am
Days With Spotty Jack
There once was a rabbit,a very unusual rabbit,his name is Spotty Jack.There’s one problem……He’s MADLY energized.He eats & drinks sugar cubes every night….One day Jacks owner,Chris,decides to take him to the park.Hopping along they came across Doggy-The-Dog.So Doggy-Dog was doing fine until Jack hopped on his head and made him cry and run away.Chris was dissipointed,so he tries to calm him down….Obviously it doesen’t work…When they finally arrive dto the park, Jack saw kids and got excited.So Jack hopped and everything like swings,slides and monkey bars.He broke all the items and broke the kids hearts…Finally,Jack came along an alligator that was sitting out of it’s lake.The alligator got so annoyed he just had to CRUNCH!!!Good Bye Spotty Jack!
March 27th, 2008 at 11:30 am
Caddie The Cat/Once apon a time there was a cat named Caddie the cat.She lives with the licker family.She has a big head and a small body.But there is a big problem she cant lick and she’s green. So one day she went off and met a friend. His name was Thomas the turtle. She thought she coudnt lick herself mayby she could and it would work. But, it didnt work. The turtle just got annoyed. He tryed to run away but he was to slow. So after that she walked up to a dog named DD the dog. So she tryed again. But, it didnt work all the dog did was growl. So the cat got annoyed this time. After, she went up to a bear. His name Bow Wow the bear. He just wasnt for the liking. So he threated to eat her .But, he coulden’t fit her head in his mouth.So he tour her to peices. THE END
March 28th, 2008 at 6:07 am
A Dog Who Talk’s to Much/once there was a dog named Copper who had a bad promblem. He lived with the Talker’s. He always made fun of people. Nobody knew why. He had three friends too.The four friends always hang out. Copper problem was he talk to much. Copper talk bad people he even know. The three friends names were cranzy cat, vicki sue,and boo th mouse.I was he’s owner.Vicki sue is going to try to help Copper with he’s talking problem. Vicki sue said, your rude,and Copper said,your mama is so fat she is fat alber. then he strated to laugh ha ha ha and that didn’t work.Then cranzy cat was going to help.A dog should even talk cranzy cat said.Copper said you talk so i can talk then boo the mouse tryed to help he eat this Copper said grose.It was a bowl of hot soce.Then Natori said, I’m going to help Copper stop talking. Come here Copper I tapped his mouth shut. For he can’t talk any more.
March 28th, 2008 at 8:45 am
Buper!
Once there was a cute,little,brown eyed frog that was named Frigel . That lived
with the Belching family but he had a problem. His problem was he burps all
the time. The Belching family brought him to the beach to give him some freash
air. When thay got to the beach frigel jumped out of his cage. Jumping and
burping all the way to the ocean. Phillpie the fish was out of water drinking
water! Frigel swam as he could to get the water but he missed. There was an
island with a turtel with a two gallon coke botel. Frigel asked Tesa the turtle
“can I have some coke?”Burrrrrpppppp!”NO!” and frigel ran away. Seek the shark
was swimming around frigel. Seek hated burps . Frigel burped Seek ate Frigel
and Frigel is still burping today.
March 28th, 2008 at 8:56 am
parker the dog barks to much!
One day their was named Parker.He had a big problem,he barked to much.So he went to the cat Vicky to get helpbut,Vicky was so tired she went to sleep on him.So Parker went to Mike the mouse but,got mad and ran away.So Parker went to Buzzy the bee but,he was so mad already he stung him and flew away.After that sting he wasn’t barking anymore.
March 28th, 2008 at 9:47 am
Blurguler/once there was a mouse named Misy. Misy couldn’t stop running and smelt like a gym sock. One day Misy came across Sly the snake. One time Sly laid in front of Misy and opened his mouth wide. The next thing Misy knew Sly was belly up and she needed a new fiend. The next day Misy met a rat named Risky. Risky was nice to Misy and asked to have a race. Misy was on the table and Risky was on the floor. Once Misy turned around all he could see was Risky’s tell and a piece of a crayon on the floor. That night a burglar broke into Misy’s home! Misy ran up his body and around his head. Then he punched himself and made him fall over! Then Misy ran up a table and pushed a bottle off the edge. It knocked the burglar out! Misy stopped and looked at the burglar. Suddenly Misy noticed she was standing! It was a miracle! Misy knew the first thing she would do was take a shower.
March 28th, 2008 at 11:18 am
The frog who couldn’t say hello
Once upon a time there was a named Hoppy who had a problem.
He couldn’t say hello.
One day when hoppy was sleeping matt showed up.
”Hello’’said matt.”Bye’’said Hoppy.So matt left.
Sadly hoppy hops away.
Then Harry flew by with clay in his mouth.
Harry was Hoppy’s best friend.He knew about his friend’s problem.
So he took him to the wise jaguar. ”Just say he-llo.” ”Okay.Hello.”
He could finaly say hello.
March 28th, 2008 at 11:34 am
LITTLE JERRY
Little Jerry a.k.a Jerry the mouse,had a problom he was to little .He hardly could do anything.Her friend Lucy helped Jerry get bigger.She tried three things.First she tried to give him lots of cheese. But that dindt work!Second she tried to make him toll shoesbut that didnt work! Third he grew tough, but he didn’t grow taller.
March 28th, 2008 at 11:36 am
Wow The Bear
There once was a bear named Wow, He wasn’t a normal bear he had a problem. He couldn’t eat what all the other bears ate. He couldn’t fish. Alll bears know how to fish. His mom and dad felt weird about him, but he was harmless. He couldn’t kill a fliy.
Every day in the forest was a good day to catch a fish ar two. He didn’t want to tell his dad that he doesn’t want to kill a fish, He had a good day playing with his toys. whiy would he whant to mess that up. He trid to catch a fish. Your not trying to fish the dad ylaled. I will never be as good as the rest of you at fishing. Why don’t you understand that? Wow yelled dad.
Wow walked in to the forest to get away frome his familly. He had never been in the woods before, so he got lost a couple of times. He was walking in the woods untill a monkey named Sam jumped out of a tree. He scared the big bear. He asked what is wrong whith you? I can’t catch a fish like the rest of the bears. The monkey said i cant help you whith that im not a bear i dont eat fish i eat leaves i now some bodey bthat can help you he nowes every thing.
The big bear that coldent heart a bear began his jurney to the snake. He finlley mad it Bob the snake he said my friend tolled me you where coming but not whiy you where. Whate is the problem whithe you i am not a real bear i can fish i now a gie that nowes a gie he loves to be in the montines he is a bear he loves fish ok i will triy this one time.
The big exzostid bear whint to whalk a nother mile or two he had to whalk over the bridge that whas going to fall and brake over the valkano. He riched a bear named michal he whas the badest bear in the woods he was the bigest to he was a gint i couldent belive my eyes . He was twelve feet taler than me he had to know how to fish he said leat me take you to my lake the bear had to teach him five good leasens.
he had to teach him how to swimme,how to stand,how to look,how to catch,how to eat the fish he teasted the bear .
I PASED i cant what to tell my mom and dad whin the bear got home his dad said hay son the way he all whahay sayes it i now how to fish. Wow i that you would never learn im proud of you son.
THE END
March 31st, 2008 at 10:01 am
Bow Wow The Bear!!!!!!! There once was a bear named Wow he had a big problem he couldent eat he coldent catch a fish ? His mom and dad wereod about him. He just wasent normal.
It was a nise day out side whin his dad tried to teach him how to fish he trid puting his favrit food at the botomof the lake he just couldent swim that was not a good sighn for a baer
He tolled his dad i will never be as good at fishing like all the reast of the bears so wow walked of and leaft his dad at the lake whin he got to the woodes he feallt lost he had never bin in the woodes befor so he didnt know his way arond he whished he never left his dad . He found a new friend he was a monkey named bob hanging from a tree the monkey whas not a good catcher .
he meat a new friend in the forist he was a snake he asked what is the problem i cant fish like the rest
April 8th, 2008 at 7:56 am
Holly The Hamster
Holly was a hamster. She came from a family called the Hamy family. They all thought that she had a problem. She always got out of her cage and went to the bathroom on the floor. It always smelt like rotten apples all over the house.It was terrible. One day their grandfather came over to get some things. Well we coundnt find Holly so they were worried that their grandfather would start to wonder what that horrible smell was. Then all of the sudden Holly was going on grandfathers shoulder. Grandfather was out the door in the blink of an eye. At that point their mother said that something had to be done about this. Well the children did not want to this they loved Holly. So they had to find something to do about this. Then there it was right in her head she would buy her a new cage it was the best idea ever invented. Well it wasnt the best idea. Do you know how hard Holly can chew? Well i do she chewed right threw that cage. So i had to think of a better plan. There it was right in my head i knew what i would do. I would put a rock where she had been chewing and getting out. It worked for a while then she chewed another hole. So then i had to think of another and a better plan. Then it hit me i would put her in this really cool box that had everything that shr needed in it. It also had holes in it so she could breath and it worked we never smelt the smell of rotten apples again!
October 26th, 2009 at 9:41 am
Self-Whale
Long ago, there was once a killer whale named Norm. But there was one thing that he couldn’t do that other whales could: Swim! He was black & white, & had a smooth, swervey pattern. His eyes were like painted black grapes. He had a couple of friends: Samuel, Dick, and Carsel. Samuel was a noisy sea gull that got annoyed easily, Dick was a dolphin who has a money problem, & Carsel was a carp who usually has a hard time sleeping
Ever since Norm was born, he couldn’t swim. Because he couldn’t swim, he was forced to live his life on shore, so he had to take swimming lessons from Dick. “Oh, hi, Dick! You’re early today,” stated Norm.
“All right, let’s get started. First, let’s work on using your back tail. If you’re having trouble, then try flopping around using your back bone.” said Dick.
“All right, I’ll try it…” Norm told Dick nervously. *SPLASH!*
“Bibillibleilp…GASP! It’s no good, Dick… I just can’t swim!” Suddenly, Dick felt a REALLY hard prick on his head.
“OUCH!! WHAT was THAT!!?” Yelled Norm. It was Samuel, the sea gull.
“Hurry up & learn how to swim already! And no! I WON’T leave this spot because this is my favorite spot!” yelled Samuel.
“It’s not so easy, you know, learning how to swim!” Norm yelled right on back. Splip! Out of the water popped Carsel, the tired Carp.
“I find this hard to say, but I actually agree with Samuel. I can’t get to sleep because of your wailing, and your splashing keeps on knocking my bed around.” Carsel told Norm sleepily.
“You too, Carsel?” sighed Norm dreadingly.
The next day, Dick came with a strange-looking fish.
“This is Dacsah!” Dick explained excitedly to Norm. “Dacsah is a physiatrist who specializes in giving the client more self-confidence.” After a long talk, Dacsah basically said that Norm didn’t have enough self-confidence. Then, Dick gave the lessons for that day, and… Norm did great! After a couple weeks, everyone was very happy. Their daily lives were much more comfortable, so EVERYONE was happy.
THE END
Norm as a child “I can’t swim!!!”
October 26th, 2009 at 9:50 am
Mickey the clownfish
In the deep blue sea there lived a small clownfish named Mickey, but he was not funny like the rest of his family, although he told his jokes anyway.
Mickey was dashing through the streets when he found his friend, Leo the lionfish. “Hi, Leo!”
“Hi, Mickey!” Leo said sarcastically
“Do you want to hear a joke?”
“Um.”
“Great!! Ok, why did the chicken cross the road? To get to the other side! Ha, ha, ha!!!”
“Ok. Mickey, I have to go home” Leo said rushingly.
Mickey was rushing along when he ran into Mittens the catfish. “Hi Mittens how are you?” Mickey said with excitement.
“Mickey, you scared me, and you made me drop my book!”
“Sorry, but I know what will make you feel better, joke!”
“No thanks, I have to go home.
Mickey was finally going home until he saw his friend Max the dogfish on the bench nearby and he went to go talk to him. “Hi Max!”
“Ahhhh Mickey, haven’t I told you not to sneak up on me you made me mess up my worksheet!”
“Sorry, but do you want to hear a joke?” Mickey said trying to make him feel better.
“No! Now if you excuse me, I have to head back to school to get another paper!”
After supper Leo went off to Mickey’s house to help him do homework like he does every night, because Mickey needs help focusing, and his parents can’t keep him.
“Mickey?”
“Yes, what is it?”
“I need to talk to you about your jokes.”
“Yes, what do you need?”
“Well, you see they’re not that good. Mittens & Max have been avoiding you because of your jokes. You see, you think that things are funny just because it is different then what you see everyday.”
“Oh, I thought that Mittens & Max were avoiding me because they were mad.”
“Nope.”
“Well, I’ll try to change and stop my jokes.”
“Ok, see you tomorrow!! Bye!!
October 26th, 2009 at 9:51 am
Polly and Her Perfect Problem
Polly was a beautiful white pony with a long elegant tail and was extremely soft. She ate hay, carrots, and good green grass. She loved to hang out with her friends. Holly was her best friend and they had a lot in common. They were both white and had long lovely tails. They also loved going to the mall.
Once Holly and Polly were at the mall and Dale the dog came up and said, “You aren’t cool because you have a big head.” “No she doesn’t you are just jealous,” Holly said furiously. Dale steadily kept on coming up with nicknames and finally Polly ran into the bathroom crying. Holly, of course as a best friend usually would do, went after her. Just before she did that she told Dale to stop, and that it had gone too far.
Dale and Polly obviously don’t like each other. Dale was always picking on her. It was not just Dale, it was also Walter the woodpecker. One day Walter and Dale were at the fair. Dale started picking on Polly again. Polly was trying to stand up for herself but all of the tears burst out and Dale kept on going. Walter told Dale that was enough, but Dale would not stop. Walter realized, slowly, that he had not been a very good animal for what he had done. He told Dale that he was done with making animals upset and that he was not Dale’s friend anymore. Dale said, “fine I will just start picking on you; I don’t need you anyway!”
Walter said “fine” and went to Polly and apologized. Poly accepted Walter’s apology.
Dale was still making fun of Polly but she was through with being made fun of. She went up to him and said “dude you need to stop making fun of me for who I am. If you have something to say, say it to me and all of my friends.” As she said that, all of the animals moved behind her. Dale had realized that what he had done was wrong. He started to feel bad for what he had done. Dale felt really bad and he apologized. Polly gladly accepted his apology.
The End!!!
October 26th, 2009 at 9:53 am
Zacky the Snake
Zacky is a long snake that is a bright color of green. He hogs down leaves. He feels smooth. He is very long. A total of 16 feet! He has 8 long legs. He is a BIG SNAKE-LIZARD!
One day, Shorty the Spider was walking down the street. She walked into the forest near a damp tree. She spotted Zacky the Snake coming toward her. She ran away. Shorty turned around and saw Zacky coming after her. She got tired and slowed down.
Zacky came and ate her. Gobble, Gobble, Gobble!
Not too long after that, Benny the Beetle was crawling on that same street. He saw the snake and zoomed down to him. He started talking in beetle. He was eaten by the snake.
Uhhh, Mary the cockroach was strolling down the very same road. She is a baby cockroach, so she was hard to see. Mary saw the snake coming toward her, and she got smashed. That is why you don’t want to be a bug.
October 29th, 2009 at 9:43 am
Gary Gets His Tongue
Gary the anteater had a very short tongue, (obviously a very big problem for an anteater.) People often made fun of him as a child. When Gary became old enough to take care of himself, he was kicked out of the ant eater clan. His best friend, Harry the ant, tried to support him when he got kicked out of his own home for having a short tongue. Harry still kept his distance though just in case Gary’s tongue grew, and he ate Harry.
So Harry and Gary ran away. They were just about to reach a forest on the south side of Gary’s old home, when they heard a female voice from behind. It was a young spider named Sandy.
“Hi!” she said “I’m Sandy. Can I come with you?”
“No!” said Gary, “I don’t even know who you are!”
“Well I’m coming anyway and you can’t stop me.” Sandy said calmly.
Gary and Harry let Sandy come. What they didn’t know was that Sandy was planning on killing Gary, because she hated anteaters. She was going to try to bite him. This would poison him and he would die!
Gary, Harry, and Sandy all continued to walk through the forest. They didn’t know were they where going or why, but they just kept on walking on through the long forest.
Then out of the dark depths of the forest they heard a voice. It got closer and closer until it seemed the voice was right beside them. Then out of the dark green forest an anteater jumped out of the bushes.
“Hey!” She said in a high pitch voice. “I’m Amy.” She looked down at Harry. She didn’t move for some time before asking, “Why is there an ant here?”
“Oh, well he’s my best friend.” Gary saw the look on her face knowing she was confused. “I’m a vegetarian.” He explained. She told them she was kicked of her clan for being a vegetarian. They gladly said she could join them.
Harry and Gary went out to a small clearing so Gary could tell Harry not to be afraid of Amy. As they did this, Sandy decided to put her plan into action.
As she followed them out there a monkey grabbed Gary’s tongue thinking it was a bug. He pulled it up and Harry’s tongue grew just as Sandy jumped out at him. Then out of pure anteater instincts he ate Sandy.
Weeks later Gary and Amy got married. They where accepted into a vegetarian anteater clan. Harry was their neighbor, and Harry and Gary stayed best friends. They all lived happily for the rest of their lives, and they where never bothered by spiders ever again!
The End By: Rachel
October 29th, 2009 at 9:49 am
Cues Not Rainbow
Once upon a time in an underwater sea cave lived three fish named Daniel, Kristen, and Clue.
Clue one day said, “I’m, not rainbow.
“What?! This is impossible!” said Daniel. “We raised you, we helped you, and even with your homework.”
“You may have, but I’m not rainbow.” Said Clue.
“ Wait, wait I’ve got it your playing a joke on us” said
Kristen.
Nope. You’re my parents, but I’m not rainbow, said
Clue.
Wait I don’t get it were rainbow trout’s and were suppose to be rainbow. Ok, then you was rainbow yesterday, but not to day I mean that doesn’t make perfect sense. You might be sick. Said Kristen”
“Yeah that could be it. Let’s go to Doctor Fisher’s office. Said Daniel”
Ok, now that were in the car, are you sure you want to take me to the doctor. Said Kristen
“Yes, but you could get a shot. Said Clue”
“Well, I guess it want be that much harm. As long as I get better I want care.” Said Clue”
“Now that were back in the office and out of the waiting room we can get to work.” Said doctor fisher
“Ok, Clue you weigh 30 pounds and your height is 3 foot 2 inches. Ok, the doctor will be back here in a few minutes. Said doctor fisher
“Thank you. Said kristen
” I’m scared.”said clue
“Why?”
“Well I might not be rainbow for a long time.”
“I’m sure there’s a good explanation for this. “
“Hi, I’m Doctor Fisher. “a
“Oh, what a good case of your not rainbow “
“Say what? Oh.
“Yep, it should be gone in a couple of days.
“So, no shots or medicine.”
“Yep.”
“Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! “Ok, any one up for some cookies.”
“Yep. Ok, and then let’s eat. “Yum, yum, yum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 29th, 2009 at 9:50 am
Tommy the Gummy Bear
“Where do you think your going mister?” Tommy didn’t answer his mom.. His mom chased after him but she was to late. Tommy was green with sky blue eyes. Tommy’s mom was a green gummy bear with red eyes. Tommy sometimes wears dippers. Some of his friends pick on him .So he tries to stop wearing it .He wears it so much it is starting to stink. Tommy’s friend said lets go play outside. Tommy never took a bath because he thought his mom would throw it away.
At school Tommy’s class got a new student. The new student was yellow with red hair. His Dad was going to come make him take a bath. Tommy’s dad was red with white hair. “Where is my son?” asked his dad.
His mom said” He’s in his room maybe. Well I’m going to check. When he got up there Tommy was in the tub. Tommy I see you’re in the tub.” Yea” Tommy said to his dad. At school Tommy and his friends played tag.
Hey said” kid can I play. “Tommy said” yes you can play. Do you know some one a little here at school .Well can I be your friend. Yes you can the new kid said. Well I like you a lot.” Can you help me with my homework?” said Kid. “I will see what I can do. Said Tommy.” See you later friend.
John was a mean gummy bear. As Tommy could see John picked on him. Tommy was filling like he was going to cry. But Tommy said he was not going to care about what John said. He was very mean to the new kid. So at the last day of school Tommy had enough. So John pushed Tommy so a fight broke out. After Tommy got home his mom was upset that he had a black eye. Kid came over to see if Tommy was ok. After he was done taken a bath he said “I love you mom and goodnight.”
October 29th, 2009 at 9:50 am
The Fantastic Life Of…This…Dude…
Once upon a time there lived a chimpanzee. His name was Adahadahadahbuscabe. He loved playing basketball. He was very good at it. When he made a shot he screamed very loud. His scream is as loud as bullhorn. When his parents call him home he’s easy to find. His skin is lighter than any other chimpanzee.
One day he came home from school, and was crying. People have always made fun of his name and he was use to it. But today he was fed up. He just couldn’t take it anymore. So he decided to talk to his mom about it. They went inside their tree/house so that is was only the two of them. Adahadahadahbuscabe wanted to express his feeling. He was crying his eyes out and breathing very heavily. His mom basically told him to ignore those people.
So the next school day he tried to ignore them. At lunchtime he decided to sit with his friend, Tom. Tom told Adahadahadahbuscabe,” People make fun of me because I’m friends with you.” Tom told him to meet him at his house tonight. Later that night he met Tom at his house. Tom wanted to talk about his problem. Adahadahadahbuscabe told Tom just to block out and ignore what people say about him. He also said that nothing will make them not be friends. They both agreed.
When Adahadahadahbuscabe got back Toms house he realized that his sister, Jen, had the same problem as Tom, but in a related way. Jen said,” I’m embarrassed I’m related to you.” They decided to talk about it. They both understood that it was not Adahadahadahbuscabe’s fault. Jen didn’t want to cry about the situation. Adahadahadahbuscabe told her the same thing he told Tom. So Adahadahadahbuscabe didn’t change the way he acted or his name. He stills likes basketball, still stands out, and still screams loud. And everybody lived very, very, very, very, very awesome-after.
October 29th, 2009 at 9:50 am
Once upon a time there was a dolphin named Lilly. She had a new a new ball to play with. So the next day Lilly was really bored and didn‘t had anything to do so she decided to play with her new ball. When she got the ball she started playing with it. After a few moments she saw a big shark and she got really scared. Then after a while the shark left so Lilly continue to play, then a few minutes later the shark came back, then when Lilly saw the shark she got really scared again but the shark didn’t want to hurt Lilly. After a while the shark went up to Lilly and he told her his name which was Bobby then he asked her if she wanted to be his friend, so she said “ I will think about it” .Then after she think she told Bobby the answer which was yes. So Bobby got really excided so Lilly then asked Bobby if he wanted to play with the new ball with her.
The next day Lilly decided to play with her new best friend Bobby. So then Lilly said that if she wanted to play with Bobby that she had to clean her house first. So Lilly got started after a few hours Lilly was finished cleaning her house so she got her cell phone and went to her contacts and she looked through her contacts until she finds Bobby’s phone number. After 1 minute she found Bobby’s number so she called him. When shark heard his phone ringing he went to his room to get his phone when he looked in his screen he saw Lilly’s name and phone number. So Bobby pick the phone and answer the call. When he answers he says “hello” after that Lilly told Bobby to come over her house and Bobby said “okay” I will be there in a few minutes”. But when bobby got there he didn’t come by himself, he came with a whole lot of other friends to play with.
After they all got really tire to play catch they all went inside Lilly’s house to eat a little snack. After they were finished eating their snack Lilly told Bobby to go to his friends so he can ask them if they wanted to sleep over her house. So Bobby said “okay” so he went to his friends and ask them if they wanted to sleep over her house. So they said “sure”. So they all saw a scary movie and also ate popcorn in the living room. After the movie was over they told scary stories to each other after that they all wanted to go to bed because it was already 3:00Am and they were all sleepy. So they all went to the basement upstairs to get their sleeping bags and to set it up to go to sleep. And they live happily ever after.
THE END
Karen Guillen
6th period
October 30th, 2009 at 9:36 am
Harry the Crazy Laughing Hyena
Hello I’m going to tell you about the amazing Harry the crazy laughing hyena. Harry loved to make fat jokes about cows and elephants. He hated bugs and snakes because of their size .He also hate cheetahs
because of how fast they are.
One day ago Harry met Joey the fat jellyfish walking down there street going to the market. While he was at the market Harry asked that night if he could spend the night and Joey said yes .So that night they were trying to go to sleep but harry saw a cow and started laughing .So fat Joey got cranky and yelled at harry that night .
On the next day some one named cranky George the German shard appeared. That day George went over to harry’s house and hurt his leg. So Harry asked if he needed to spend the night and he said yes thank you. Later that night George asked if he had a radio and Harry said no George started crying. Harry said I’m sorry and George still didn’t forgive him because he got mad.
Then came Spencer snake. He couldn’t move because Harry hates snakes. He couldn’t swerve so he couldn’t move and Harry thought he was dead. So Harry took him back to his house. Spencer was falling out of his chair so that Harry would throw him out of his house, and that was a normal week of Harry the laughing hyena.
November 2nd, 2009 at 10:56 am
Matt the Tiger and His Friends
Matt the tiger had no black stripes. He had grape sized eyes & orange fur. He ate anything he could get a hold of like; monkeys, birds, antelopes, & rabbits. He was picked on by other tigers and he smelled like a cow. Bob the lion was his best friend.
They went everywhere & did everything together. But finally Bob couldn’t take Matt’s smell any longer so he quit being his friend on that day.
“You are so mean” said Matt.
”Oh get over it “said Bob. So Bob tries to pull this off on Jeff the jaguar.
”Not you too” said Bob.
“You were mean to Matt & I’ve had it with you picking on him” said Jeff,”You treat him like he has no feelings”. While that was happening Gabe the hare heard Matt crying. So he went into his house & cheered Matt up. Gabe almost got eaten by Jeff. Because Jeff chased him everyday.
As their friendship started Bob’s & Jeff’s friendship ended. But Bob figured out that he had hurt Matt’s feelings & now knows how Matt felt when he did that to Matt. And everybody didn’t except his apology. So Bob had hurt Matt’s feelings for the last time because he had no black stripes. After a year or 2, every one forgave each other & Matt finally took a shower.
November 2nd, 2009 at 10:57 am
Long ago, there was once a killer whale named Norm. But there was one thing that he couldn’t do that other whales could: Swim! He was black & white, & had a smooth, swervey pattern. His eyes were like painted black grapes. He had a couple of friends: Samuel, Dick, and Carsel. Samuel was a noisy sea gull that got annoyed easily, Dick was a dolphin who has a money problem, & Carsel was a carp who usually has a hard time sleeping
Ever since Norm was born, he couldn’t swim. Because he couldn’t swim, he was forced to live his life on shore, so he had to take swimming lessons from Dick. “Oh, hi, Dick! You’re early today,” stated Norm.
“All right, let’s get started. First, let’s work on using your back tail. If you’re having trouble, then try flopping around using your back bone.” said Dick.
“All right, I’ll try it…” Norm told Dick nervously. *SPLASH!*
“Bibillibleilp…GASP! It’s no good, Dick… I just can’t swim!” Suddenly, Dick felt a REALLY hard prick on his head.
“OUCH!! WHAT was THAT!!?” Yelled Norm. It was Samuel, the sea gull.
“Hurry up & learn how to swim already! And no! I WON’T leave this spot because this is my favorite spot!” yelled Samuel.
“It’s not so easy, you know, learning how to swim!” Norm yelled right on back. Splip! Out of the water popped Carsel, the tired Carp.
“I find this hard to say, but I actually agree with Samuel. I can’t get to sleep because of your wailing, and your splashing keeps on knocking my bed around.” Carsel told Norm sleepily.
“You too, Carsel?” sighed Norm dreadingly.
The next day, Dick came with a strange-looking fish.
“This is Dacsah!” Dick explained excitedly to Norm. “Dacsah is a physiatrist who specializes in giving the client more self-confidence.” After a long talk, Dacsah basically said that Norm didn’t have enough self-confidence. Then, Dick gave the lessons for that day, and… Norm did great! After a couple weeks, everyone was very happy. Their daily lives were much more comfortable, so EVERYONE was happy.
THE END
November 2nd, 2009 at 11:01 am
One day there was an iguana named Iggy. He loved to eat pizza, it is his favorite food. He smells like cheese because he eats lots of cheese. He feels like a pillow because his skin is very soft and he uses lots of lotion. Then one day Iggy woke up in the morning.
When Iggy woke up he got hungry so he went outside. That’s when he ran into his friend Tristan the Turtle. He is extremely hungry because he ran out of food. Iggy tells him he is hungry too. So they both go out and keep walking in search of food.
That’s when they run into Henry the Hawk. Tristin and Iggy tell him they are very, very hungry. So Henry gives them money so they can all go get something to eat. It is the last of Henry’s money. But they all go to buy something to eat anyway.
On the way they ran into another friend named Mike the Monkey. Iggy, Tristin, and Henry tell him they are very, very hungry. He says he is hungry too and tells them they should all just order a pizza. They all order pizza. The pizza guy says the pizza will be delivered in 30 minutes or less. They wait, and wait, and wait until it has been an hour. Then they attack the pizza place! Then the pizza place is damaged, and they leave with all the pizzas in the pizza place!