Comments on: “Mob’s Voice versus Hero’s Voice” Prompt http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/03/06/mobs-voice-versus-heros-voice-prompt/ A Place for Student Writers to Publish Writing that was Inspired at WritingFix Sat, 19 Jun 2010 00:18:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Macy Mousseau http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/03/06/mobs-voice-versus-heros-voice-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-438 Macy Mousseau Wed, 26 May 2010 17:40:28 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/03/06/mobs-voice-versus-heros-voice-prompt/#comment-438 Letting Go Suspicious Determined Want control Want to have space Don't want to lose my child Just want to be a teen Trying to be responsible Trying to have fun It was so much easier when you were little I can't be your baby forever Why can't you just cooperate? Just an extra half hour? Then you're going to get into trouble But i'm responsible I'm not sure please mom,please!? Will you call me? So i know you're safe? I can do that I love you Honey I love you Mom Letting Go
Suspicious

Determined

Want control Want to have space

Don’t want to lose my child

Just want to be a teen

Trying to be responsible

Trying to have fun

It was so much easier
when you were little

I can’t be your baby forever

Why can’t you just cooperate?

Just an extra half hour?

Then you’re going to get into trouble

But i’m responsible

I’m not sure

please mom,please!?

Will you call me?
So i know you’re safe?

I can do that

I love you Honey I love you Mom

]]> By: Macy Mousseau http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/03/06/mobs-voice-versus-heros-voice-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-437 Macy Mousseau Wed, 26 May 2010 17:37:41 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/03/06/mobs-voice-versus-heros-voice-prompt/#comment-437 Letting Go Suspicious Determined Want control Want to have space Don't want to lose my child Just want to be a teen Trying to be responsible Trying to have fun It was so much easier when you were little i can't be your baby forever Why can't you just cooperate? Just an extra half hour? Then you're going to get into trouble But i'm responsible I'm not sure please mom,please!? Will you call me? So i know you're safe? I can do that I love you Honey I love you Mom Letting Go
Suspicious

Determined

Want control Want to have space

Don’t want to lose my child

Just want to be a teen

Trying to be responsible

Trying to have fun

It was so much easier
when you were little

i can’t be your baby forever

Why can’t you just cooperate?

Just an extra half hour?

Then you’re going to get into trouble

But i’m responsible

I’m not sure

please mom,please!?

Will you call me?
So i know you’re safe?

I can do that

I love you Honey I love you Mom

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