“Perspective Paragraph” Prompt
WritingFix has a fun lesson–called ”Perspective Paragraphs” -that was inspired by the picture book Tough Boris by Mem Fox.
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June 3rd, 2009 at 3:51 am
One day I met a scruffy pirate, I could tell he was scruffy because his shirt and pants were all torn and dirty. He was really greedy. I bought ice-cream and he snatched it right out of my hand and said that’s mine you scurvy dog! When we had to go to bed he was so massive he couldn’t fit on the guest room bed. I was furious because I had to clean up after him. He didn’t even take a shower causing the whole NEIGHBORHOOD to turn smelly!
La’Nyah second Grade
June 3rd, 2009 at 3:56 am
Pirate’s are loud because they don’t have manners. Pirates are greedy because they want the treasure all for themselves. Pirates are smelly because they work hard in the dirt. Pirates are weird because they talk with their mouths full. Pirates are nasty because they throw their food. Pirates are grumpy because they get mad a lot of times.
Francisco A. Second Grade
June 3rd, 2009 at 4:56 am
The pirate is smelly because he doesn’t take a shower. The pirate is ugly, he does not wash his face, so that is why. He is scary because he does not want them to look him in the eye. He is careless because if his crew cut him somewhere he wouldn’t care. He is mean because the crew doesn’t listen to him too much, that is why he is mean. He is loud because they do something wrong all the time.
Manakco Second Grade
June 3rd, 2009 at 5:19 am
WhenI first saw a pirate he really smelly, I could tell because his crew had plugs in their noses. He was legless because he was wobbly and his parrot was too. He does not brush his teeth and his teeth are green and so are his crew’s teeth too.
Jenny Second Grade