Comments on: “Perspective Paragraph” Prompt http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/ A Place for Student Writers to Publish Writing that was Inspired at WritingFix Fri, 13 Nov 2009 17:49:11 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Patricia Dale http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-224 Patricia Dale Wed, 03 Jun 2009 13:19:36 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/#comment-224 WhenI first saw a pirate he really smelly, I could tell because his crew had plugs in their noses. He was legless because he was wobbly and his parrot was too. He does not brush his teeth and his teeth are green and so are his crew's teeth too. Jenny Second Grade WhenI first saw a pirate he really smelly, I could tell because his crew had plugs in their noses. He was legless because he was wobbly and his parrot was too. He does not brush his teeth and his teeth are green and so are his crew’s teeth too.

Jenny Second Grade

]]> By: Patricia Dale http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-223 Patricia Dale Wed, 03 Jun 2009 12:56:27 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/#comment-223 The pirate is smelly because he doesn't take a shower. The pirate is ugly, he does not wash his face, so that is why. He is scary because he does not want them to look him in the eye. He is careless because if his crew cut him somewhere he wouldn't care. He is mean because the crew doesn't listen to him too much, that is why he is mean. He is loud because they do something wrong all the time. Manakco Second Grade The pirate is smelly because he doesn’t take a shower. The pirate is ugly, he does not wash his face, so that is why. He is scary because he does not want them to look him in the eye. He is careless because if his crew cut him somewhere he wouldn’t care. He is mean because the crew doesn’t listen to him too much, that is why he is mean. He is loud because they do something wrong all the time.

Manakco Second Grade

]]> By: Patricia Dale http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-222 Patricia Dale Wed, 03 Jun 2009 11:56:31 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/#comment-222 Pirate's are loud because they don't have manners. Pirates are greedy because they want the treasure all for themselves. Pirates are smelly because they work hard in the dirt. Pirates are weird because they talk with their mouths full. Pirates are nasty because they throw their food. Pirates are grumpy because they get mad a lot of times. Francisco A. Second Grade Pirate’s are loud because they don’t have manners. Pirates are greedy because they want the treasure all for themselves. Pirates are smelly because they work hard in the dirt. Pirates are weird because they talk with their mouths full. Pirates are nasty because they throw their food. Pirates are grumpy because they get mad a lot of times.

Francisco A. Second Grade

]]> By: Patricia Dale http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-221 Patricia Dale Wed, 03 Jun 2009 11:51:00 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/04/16/perspective-paragraph-prompt/#comment-221 One day I met a scruffy pirate, I could tell he was scruffy because his shirt and pants were all torn and dirty. He was really greedy. I bought ice-cream and he snatched it right out of my hand and said that's mine you scurvy dog! When we had to go to bed he was so massive he couldn't fit on the guest room bed. I was furious because I had to clean up after him. He didn't even take a shower causing the whole NEIGHBORHOOD to turn smelly! La'Nyah second Grade One day I met a scruffy pirate, I could tell he was scruffy because his shirt and pants were all torn and dirty. He was really greedy. I bought ice-cream and he snatched it right out of my hand and said that’s mine you scurvy dog! When we had to go to bed he was so massive he couldn’t fit on the guest room bed. I was furious because I had to clean up after him. He didn’t even take a shower causing the whole NEIGHBORHOOD to turn smelly!

La’Nyah second Grade

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