Comments on: Tell the Story Behind this Photograph…2009 M.S. Winner http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2009/05/19/tell-the-story-behind-this-photograph%e2%80%a62009-ms-winner/ A Place for Student Writers to Publish Writing that was Inspired at WritingFix Fri, 13 Nov 2009 17:49:11 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: asia http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2009/05/19/tell-the-story-behind-this-photograph%e2%80%a62009-ms-winner/comment-page-1/#comment-244 asia Tue, 20 Oct 2009 18:31:48 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/?p=408#comment-244 This just looks like a boring country road but it is not it accualy leads to a school, a middle school to be corect. that sv\chool is the best middle school any one can go to they have a 7-9th grade hallway and then there is the lunch room they get to go out to eat they get to eat at places like cypress inn, and theyare alot luckier than other kids so it is a gift to go to that school. And then they the have the best footbal team in the state but no one would play them because they are so far in the country. the picture above is the road that leads to the mibble school. This just looks like a boring country road but it is not it accualy leads to a school, a middle school to be corect. that sv\chool is the best middle school any one can go to they have a 7-9th grade hallway and then there is the lunch room they get to go out to eat they get to eat at places like cypress inn, and theyare alot luckier than other kids so it is a gift to go to that school. And then they the have the best footbal team in the state but no one would play them because they are so far in the country. the picture above is the road that leads to the mibble school.

]]> By: ann marie http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2009/05/19/tell-the-story-behind-this-photograph%e2%80%a62009-ms-winner/comment-page-1/#comment-243 ann marie Tue, 20 Oct 2009 18:30:47 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/?p=408#comment-243 There was a man named joe who was a horrid sinner and drunk and did drugs. he was a horrid man and need a change in his life. hea took the raod that alot of people took , it was the bad one. he had made alot of mistake in his life the he needed to change. but his problems werent going to change over night. he needed the Lord. about a week after he had been arrested for drunk driving. a good friend of his came to him and tried to tell him about God but he just wouldnt listen. month after month his friend kept trying to tell him about God but he wouldnt listen. one day something spoke to him to go and just listne to his friend and he did . about a month later he finally went to church with his friend and became a Christian. when he heard the story of Christ and how he saved us he cried and sobbed. Joe decided to take the road less traveled . the picture above the road less travaled , the road that not many choose to take. There was a man named joe who was a horrid sinner and drunk and did drugs. he was a horrid man and need a change in his life. hea took the raod that alot of people took , it was the bad one. he had made alot of mistake in his life the he needed to change. but his problems werent going to change over night. he needed the Lord. about a week after he had been arrested for drunk driving. a good friend of his came to him and tried to tell him about God but he just wouldnt listen. month after month his friend kept trying to tell him about God but he wouldnt listen. one day something spoke to him to go and just listne to his friend and he did . about a month later he finally went to church with his friend and became a Christian. when he heard the story of Christ and how he saved us he cried and sobbed. Joe decided to take the road less traveled . the picture above the road less travaled , the road that not many choose to take.

]]> By: Brandi S. Henderson http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2009/05/19/tell-the-story-behind-this-photograph%e2%80%a62009-ms-winner/comment-page-1/#comment-229 Brandi S. Henderson Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:49:58 +0000 http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/?p=408#comment-229 Empty There was no life there except vegatation.It appears a bright blue day but there was nothing to notice, no people or animals. The trail was losingits straightness from lack of use. The fence was unsteady as if uncared for. First the beesthen the frogs then other animals disappeared and the people started leaving because of this. But hwat of the remaining ones. The road in the picture was the main road to the small town and to the general store which was closed. But there as a strange phenomenom there when the town was alive. People's hearing was so acute they hated their neighbors for just having family conversaions. Ans birds would drive them insane. There wasa rumor everyone left because thesound traveled so close and unreasonable. Empty

There was no life there except vegatation.It appears a bright blue day but there was nothing to notice, no people or animals. The trail was losingits straightness from lack of use. The fence was unsteady as if uncared for. First the beesthen the frogs then other animals disappeared and the people started leaving because of this. But hwat of the remaining ones. The road in the picture was the main road to the small town and to the general store which was closed. But there as a strange phenomenom there when the town was alive. People’s hearing was so acute they hated their neighbors for just having family conversaions. Ans birds would drive them insane. There wasa rumor everyone left because thesound traveled so close and unreasonable.

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