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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by Jason for Mr.E</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jason for Mr.E</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Nov 2009 19:01:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One day there was an iguana named Iggy. He loved to eat pizza, it is his favorite food. He smells like cheese because he eats lots of cheese. He feels like a pillow because his skin is very soft and he uses lots of lotion. Then one day Iggy woke up in the morning.

When Iggy woke up he got hungry so he went outside. That’s when he ran into his friend Tristan the Turtle. He is extremely hungry because he ran out of food. Iggy tells him he is hungry too.  So they both go out and keep walking in search of food. 

That’s when they run into Henry the Hawk. Tristin and Iggy tell him they are very, very hungry. So Henry gives them money so they can all go get something to eat.  It is the last of Henry’s money. But they all go to buy something to eat anyway.


On the way they ran into another friend named Mike the Monkey. Iggy, Tristin, and Henry tell him they are very, very hungry. He says he is hungry too and tells them they should all just order a pizza. They all order pizza. The pizza guy says the pizza will be delivered in 30 minutes or less.  They wait, and wait, and wait until it has been an hour. Then they attack the pizza place! Then the pizza place is damaged, and they leave with all the pizzas in the pizza place!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One day there was an iguana named Iggy. He loved to eat pizza, it is his favorite food. He smells like cheese because he eats lots of cheese. He feels like a pillow because his skin is very soft and he uses lots of lotion. Then one day Iggy woke up in the morning.</p>
<p>When Iggy woke up he got hungry so he went outside. That’s when he ran into his friend Tristan the Turtle. He is extremely hungry because he ran out of food. Iggy tells him he is hungry too.  So they both go out and keep walking in search of food. </p>
<p>That’s when they run into Henry the Hawk. Tristin and Iggy tell him they are very, very hungry. So Henry gives them money so they can all go get something to eat.  It is the last of Henry’s money. But they all go to buy something to eat anyway.</p>
<p>On the way they ran into another friend named Mike the Monkey. Iggy, Tristin, and Henry tell him they are very, very hungry. He says he is hungry too and tells them they should all just order a pizza. They all order pizza. The pizza guy says the pizza will be delivered in 30 minutes or less.  They wait, and wait, and wait until it has been an hour. Then they attack the pizza place! Then the pizza place is damaged, and they leave with all the pizzas in the pizza place!</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by Jacob for Mr.E</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jacob for Mr.E</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Nov 2009 18:57:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Long ago, there was once a killer whale named Norm. But there was one thing that he couldn’t do that other whales could: Swim! He was black &amp; white, &amp; had a smooth, swervey pattern. His eyes were like painted black grapes. He had a couple of friends: Samuel, Dick, and Carsel. Samuel was a noisy sea gull that got annoyed easily, Dick was a dolphin who has a money problem, &amp; Carsel was a carp who usually has a hard time sleeping
	Ever since Norm was born, he couldn’t swim. Because he couldn’t swim, he was forced to live his life on shore, so he had to take swimming lessons from Dick. “Oh, hi, Dick! You’re early today,” stated Norm.

 “All right, let’s get started. First, let’s work on using your back tail. If you’re having trouble, then try flopping around using your back bone.” said Dick. 

“All right, I’ll try it…”  Norm told Dick nervously. *SPLASH!*

“Bibillibleilp…GASP! It’s no good, Dick… I just can’t swim!” Suddenly, Dick felt a REALLY hard prick on his head.

 “OUCH!! WHAT was THAT!!?” Yelled Norm. It was Samuel, the sea gull.

 “Hurry up &amp; learn how to swim already! And no! I WON’T leave this spot because this is my favorite spot!” yelled Samuel. 

“It’s not so easy, you know, learning how to swim!” Norm yelled right on back. Splip! Out of the water popped Carsel, the tired Carp.

 “I find this hard to say, but I actually agree with Samuel. I can’t get to sleep because of your wailing, and your splashing keeps on knocking my bed around.” Carsel told Norm sleepily. 

“You too, Carsel?” sighed Norm dreadingly.
	
The next day, Dick came with a strange-looking fish. 

“This is Dacsah!” Dick explained excitedly to Norm. “Dacsah is a physiatrist who specializes in giving the client more self-confidence.” After a long talk, Dacsah basically said that Norm didn’t have enough self-confidence. Then, Dick gave the lessons for that day, and… Norm did great! After a couple weeks, everyone was very happy. Their daily lives were much more comfortable, so EVERYONE was happy.

THE END</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Long ago, there was once a killer whale named Norm. But there was one thing that he couldn’t do that other whales could: Swim! He was black &amp; white, &amp; had a smooth, swervey pattern. His eyes were like painted black grapes. He had a couple of friends: Samuel, Dick, and Carsel. Samuel was a noisy sea gull that got annoyed easily, Dick was a dolphin who has a money problem, &amp; Carsel was a carp who usually has a hard time sleeping<br />
	Ever since Norm was born, he couldn’t swim. Because he couldn’t swim, he was forced to live his life on shore, so he had to take swimming lessons from Dick. “Oh, hi, Dick! You’re early today,” stated Norm.</p>
<p> “All right, let’s get started. First, let’s work on using your back tail. If you’re having trouble, then try flopping around using your back bone.” said Dick. </p>
<p>“All right, I’ll try it…”  Norm told Dick nervously. *SPLASH!*</p>
<p>“Bibillibleilp…GASP! It’s no good, Dick… I just can’t swim!” Suddenly, Dick felt a REALLY hard prick on his head.</p>
<p> “OUCH!! WHAT was THAT!!?” Yelled Norm. It was Samuel, the sea gull.</p>
<p> “Hurry up &amp; learn how to swim already! And no! I WON’T leave this spot because this is my favorite spot!” yelled Samuel. </p>
<p>“It’s not so easy, you know, learning how to swim!” Norm yelled right on back. Splip! Out of the water popped Carsel, the tired Carp.</p>
<p> “I find this hard to say, but I actually agree with Samuel. I can’t get to sleep because of your wailing, and your splashing keeps on knocking my bed around.” Carsel told Norm sleepily. </p>
<p>“You too, Carsel?” sighed Norm dreadingly.</p>
<p>The next day, Dick came with a strange-looking fish. </p>
<p>“This is Dacsah!” Dick explained excitedly to Norm. “Dacsah is a physiatrist who specializes in giving the client more self-confidence.” After a long talk, Dacsah basically said that Norm didn’t have enough self-confidence. Then, Dick gave the lessons for that day, and… Norm did great! After a couple weeks, everyone was very happy. Their daily lives were much more comfortable, so EVERYONE was happy.</p>
<p>THE END</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by C.J. for Mr.E</title>
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		<dc:creator>C.J. for Mr.E</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Nov 2009 18:56:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Matt the Tiger and His Friends

Matt the tiger had no black stripes. He had grape sized eyes &amp; orange fur. He ate anything he could get a hold of like; monkeys, birds, antelopes, &amp; rabbits. He was picked on by other tigers and he smelled like a cow. Bob the lion was his best friend. 

 They went everywhere &amp; did everything together. But finally Bob couldn’t take Matt’s smell any longer so he quit being his friend on that day.

 “You are so mean” said Matt.

”Oh get over it “said Bob. So Bob tries to pull this off on Jeff the jaguar.

”Not you too” said Bob.

“You were mean to Matt &amp; I’ve had it with you picking on him” said Jeff,”You treat him like he has no feelings”.  While that was happening Gabe the hare heard Matt crying. So he went into his house &amp; cheered Matt up. Gabe almost got eaten by Jeff. Because Jeff chased him everyday.

 As their friendship started Bob’s &amp; Jeff’s friendship ended. But Bob figured out that he had hurt Matt’s feelings &amp; now knows how Matt felt when he did that to Matt. And everybody didn’t except his apology.  So Bob had hurt Matt’s feelings for the last time because he had no black stripes.  After a year or 2, every one forgave each other &amp; Matt finally took a shower.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Matt the Tiger and His Friends</p>
<p>Matt the tiger had no black stripes. He had grape sized eyes &amp; orange fur. He ate anything he could get a hold of like; monkeys, birds, antelopes, &amp; rabbits. He was picked on by other tigers and he smelled like a cow. Bob the lion was his best friend. </p>
<p> They went everywhere &amp; did everything together. But finally Bob couldn’t take Matt’s smell any longer so he quit being his friend on that day.</p>
<p> “You are so mean” said Matt.</p>
<p>”Oh get over it “said Bob. So Bob tries to pull this off on Jeff the jaguar.</p>
<p>”Not you too” said Bob.</p>
<p>“You were mean to Matt &amp; I’ve had it with you picking on him” said Jeff,”You treat him like he has no feelings”.  While that was happening Gabe the hare heard Matt crying. So he went into his house &amp; cheered Matt up. Gabe almost got eaten by Jeff. Because Jeff chased him everyday.</p>
<p> As their friendship started Bob’s &amp; Jeff’s friendship ended. But Bob figured out that he had hurt Matt’s feelings &amp; now knows how Matt felt when he did that to Matt. And everybody didn’t except his apology.  So Bob had hurt Matt’s feelings for the last time because he had no black stripes.  After a year or 2, every one forgave each other &amp; Matt finally took a shower.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by Peyton_For Mr.e</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/02/12/silly-animal-problems-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-260</link>
		<dc:creator>Peyton_For Mr.e</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Oct 2009 17:36:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Harry the Crazy Laughing Hyena



Hello I’m going to tell you about the amazing Harry the crazy laughing hyena. Harry loved to make fat jokes about cows and elephants. He hated                                                                                                                                                                                          bugs and snakes because of their size .He also hate cheetahs
 because of how fast they are.

    One day ago Harry met Joey the fat jellyfish walking down there street going to the market. While he was at the market Harry asked that night if he could spend the night and Joey said yes .So that night they were trying to go to sleep but harry saw a cow and started laughing .So fat Joey got cranky and yelled at harry that night .

    On the next day some one named cranky George the German shard appeared. That day George went over to harry’s house and hurt his leg. So Harry asked if he needed to spend the night and he said yes thank you. Later that night George asked if he had a radio and Harry said no George started crying. Harry said I&#039;m sorry and George still didn’t forgive him because he got mad.

   Then came Spencer snake. He couldn’t move because Harry hates snakes. He couldn’t swerve so he couldn’t move and Harry thought he was dead. So Harry took him back to his house. Spencer was falling out of his chair so that Harry would throw him out of his house, and that was a normal week of Harry the laughing hyena.</description>
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<p>Hello I’m going to tell you about the amazing Harry the crazy laughing hyena. Harry loved to make fat jokes about cows and elephants. He hated                                                                                                                                                                                          bugs and snakes because of their size .He also hate cheetahs<br />
 because of how fast they are.</p>
<p>    One day ago Harry met Joey the fat jellyfish walking down there street going to the market. While he was at the market Harry asked that night if he could spend the night and Joey said yes .So that night they were trying to go to sleep but harry saw a cow and started laughing .So fat Joey got cranky and yelled at harry that night .</p>
<p>    On the next day some one named cranky George the German shard appeared. That day George went over to harry’s house and hurt his leg. So Harry asked if he needed to spend the night and he said yes thank you. Later that night George asked if he had a radio and Harry said no George started crying. Harry said I&#8217;m sorry and George still didn’t forgive him because he got mad.</p>
<p>   Then came Spencer snake. He couldn’t move because Harry hates snakes. He couldn’t swerve so he couldn’t move and Harry thought he was dead. So Harry took him back to his house. Spencer was falling out of his chair so that Harry would throw him out of his house, and that was a normal week of Harry the laughing hyena.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Tell the Story Behind this Photograph&#8230;2009 H.S. Winner by Ms. Kelsey's 6th period class</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ms. Kelsey's 6th period class</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 19:21:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mikala yells, &quot;No one is going to be at your party.&quot; 
Yazmin, &quot;What? I already bought my cake. All the rest of my friends are coming, I don&#039;t need you.&quot; 
Mikala looks at her with a death stare, and she says, &quot;I don&#039;t care, I can make my own party.&quot;
Yazmin sadly looks away, and she says, &quot;I don&#039;t care about you.&quot; 
As she walks away, she turns around and throws the cake at Mikala, she misses and begins to fall to her knees and cries.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mikala yells, &#8220;No one is going to be at your party.&#8221;<br />
Yazmin, &#8220;What? I already bought my cake. All the rest of my friends are coming, I don&#8217;t need you.&#8221;<br />
Mikala looks at her with a death stare, and she says, &#8220;I don&#8217;t care, I can make my own party.&#8221;<br />
Yazmin sadly looks away, and she says, &#8220;I don&#8217;t care about you.&#8221;<br />
As she walks away, she turns around and throws the cake at Mikala, she misses and begins to fall to her knees and cries.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by Karen for Mr.E</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen for Mr.E</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 17:50:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Once upon a time there was a dolphin named Lilly.  She had a new a new ball to play with. So the next day Lilly was really bored and didn‘t had anything to do so she decided to play with her new ball. When she got the ball she started playing with it. After a few moments she saw a big shark and she got really scared. Then after a while the shark left so Lilly continue to play, then a few minutes later the shark came back, then when Lilly saw the shark she got really scared again but the shark didn’t want to hurt Lilly.  After a while the shark went up to Lilly and he told her his name which was Bobby then he asked her if she wanted to be his friend, so she said “ I will think about it” .Then after she think  she told Bobby the answer which was yes. So Bobby got really excided so Lilly then asked Bobby if he wanted to play with the new ball with her. 

The next day Lilly decided to play with her new best friend Bobby. So then Lilly said that if she wanted to play with Bobby that she had to clean her house first. So Lilly got started after a few hours Lilly was finished cleaning her house so she got her cell phone and went to her contacts and she looked through her contacts until she finds Bobby’s phone number. After 1 minute she found Bobby’s number so she called him. When shark heard his phone ringing he went to his room to get his phone when he looked in his screen he saw Lilly’s name and phone number. So Bobby pick the phone and answer the call.  When he answers he says “hello” after that Lilly told Bobby to come over her house and Bobby said “okay” I will be there in a few minutes”. But when bobby got there he didn’t come by himself, he came with a whole lot of other friends to play with. 


After they all got really tire to play catch they all went inside Lilly’s house to eat a little snack. After they were finished eating their snack Lilly told Bobby to go to his friends so he can ask them if they wanted to sleep over her house. So Bobby said “okay” so he went to his friends and ask them if they wanted to sleep over her house. So they said “sure”. So they all saw a scary movie and also ate popcorn in the living room. After the movie was over they told scary stories to each other after that they all wanted to go to bed because it was already 3:00Am and they were all sleepy. So they all went to the basement upstairs to get their sleeping bags and to set it up to go to sleep. And they live happily ever after. 


                                                                    THE END 
                                                                         Karen Guillen 
                                                                     6th period</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time there was a dolphin named Lilly.  She had a new a new ball to play with. So the next day Lilly was really bored and didn‘t had anything to do so she decided to play with her new ball. When she got the ball she started playing with it. After a few moments she saw a big shark and she got really scared. Then after a while the shark left so Lilly continue to play, then a few minutes later the shark came back, then when Lilly saw the shark she got really scared again but the shark didn’t want to hurt Lilly.  After a while the shark went up to Lilly and he told her his name which was Bobby then he asked her if she wanted to be his friend, so she said “ I will think about it” .Then after she think  she told Bobby the answer which was yes. So Bobby got really excided so Lilly then asked Bobby if he wanted to play with the new ball with her. </p>
<p>The next day Lilly decided to play with her new best friend Bobby. So then Lilly said that if she wanted to play with Bobby that she had to clean her house first. So Lilly got started after a few hours Lilly was finished cleaning her house so she got her cell phone and went to her contacts and she looked through her contacts until she finds Bobby’s phone number. After 1 minute she found Bobby’s number so she called him. When shark heard his phone ringing he went to his room to get his phone when he looked in his screen he saw Lilly’s name and phone number. So Bobby pick the phone and answer the call.  When he answers he says “hello” after that Lilly told Bobby to come over her house and Bobby said “okay” I will be there in a few minutes”. But when bobby got there he didn’t come by himself, he came with a whole lot of other friends to play with. </p>
<p>After they all got really tire to play catch they all went inside Lilly’s house to eat a little snack. After they were finished eating their snack Lilly told Bobby to go to his friends so he can ask them if they wanted to sleep over her house. So Bobby said “okay” so he went to his friends and ask them if they wanted to sleep over her house. So they said “sure”. So they all saw a scary movie and also ate popcorn in the living room. After the movie was over they told scary stories to each other after that they all wanted to go to bed because it was already 3:00Am and they were all sleepy. So they all went to the basement upstairs to get their sleeping bags and to set it up to go to sleep. And they live happily ever after. </p>
<p>                                                                    THE END<br />
                                                                         Karen Guillen<br />
                                                                     6th period</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by blakeformr.e</title>
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		<dc:creator>blakeformr.e</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 17:50:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Fantastic Life Of...This...Dude...



           Once upon a time there lived a chimpanzee. His name was Adahadahadahbuscabe. He loved playing basketball. He was very good at it. When he made a shot he screamed very loud. His scream is as loud as bullhorn. When his parents call him home he’s easy to find. His skin is lighter than any other chimpanzee.
           One day he came home from school, and was crying. People have always made fun of his name and he was use to it. But today he was fed up. He just couldn’t take it anymore. So he decided to talk to his mom about it. They went inside their tree/house so that is was only the two of them. Adahadahadahbuscabe wanted to express his feeling. He was crying his eyes out and breathing very heavily. His mom basically told him to ignore those people. 
           So the next school day he tried to ignore them. At lunchtime he decided to sit with his friend, Tom. Tom told Adahadahadahbuscabe,” People make fun of me because I’m friends with you.” Tom told him to meet him at his house tonight. Later that night he met Tom at his house. Tom wanted to talk about his problem. Adahadahadahbuscabe told Tom just to block out and ignore what people say about him. He also said that nothing will make them not be friends. They both agreed. 
           When Adahadahadahbuscabe got back Toms house he realized that his sister, Jen, had the same problem as Tom, but in a related way. Jen said,” I’m embarrassed I’m related to you.” They decided to talk about it. They both understood that it was not Adahadahadahbuscabe’s fault. Jen didn’t want to cry about the situation. Adahadahadahbuscabe told her the same thing he told Tom. So Adahadahadahbuscabe didn’t change the way he acted or his name. He stills likes basketball, still stands out, and still screams loud. And everybody lived very, very, very, very, very awesome-after.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Fantastic Life Of&#8230;This&#8230;Dude&#8230;</p>
<p>           Once upon a time there lived a chimpanzee. His name was Adahadahadahbuscabe. He loved playing basketball. He was very good at it. When he made a shot he screamed very loud. His scream is as loud as bullhorn. When his parents call him home he’s easy to find. His skin is lighter than any other chimpanzee.<br />
           One day he came home from school, and was crying. People have always made fun of his name and he was use to it. But today he was fed up. He just couldn’t take it anymore. So he decided to talk to his mom about it. They went inside their tree/house so that is was only the two of them. Adahadahadahbuscabe wanted to express his feeling. He was crying his eyes out and breathing very heavily. His mom basically told him to ignore those people.<br />
           So the next school day he tried to ignore them. At lunchtime he decided to sit with his friend, Tom. Tom told Adahadahadahbuscabe,” People make fun of me because I’m friends with you.” Tom told him to meet him at his house tonight. Later that night he met Tom at his house. Tom wanted to talk about his problem. Adahadahadahbuscabe told Tom just to block out and ignore what people say about him. He also said that nothing will make them not be friends. They both agreed.<br />
           When Adahadahadahbuscabe got back Toms house he realized that his sister, Jen, had the same problem as Tom, but in a related way. Jen said,” I’m embarrassed I’m related to you.” They decided to talk about it. They both understood that it was not Adahadahadahbuscabe’s fault. Jen didn’t want to cry about the situation. Adahadahadahbuscabe told her the same thing he told Tom. So Adahadahadahbuscabe didn’t change the way he acted or his name. He stills likes basketball, still stands out, and still screams loud. And everybody lived very, very, very, very, very awesome-after.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by justice for mr.e</title>
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		<dc:creator>justice for mr.e</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 17:50:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tommy the Gummy Bear


           “Where do you think your going mister?”  Tommy didn’t answer his mom.. His mom chased after him but she was to late. Tommy was green with sky blue eyes. Tommy’s mom was a green gummy bear with red eyes. Tommy sometimes wears dippers. Some of his friends pick on him .So he tries to stop wearing it .He wears it so much it is starting to stink. Tommy’s friend said lets go play outside. Tommy never took a bath because he thought his mom would throw it away.

                  At school Tommy’s class got a new student. The new student was yellow with red hair. His Dad was going to come make him take a bath. Tommy’s dad was red with white hair. “Where is my son?” asked his dad. 

                His mom said” He’s in his room maybe. Well I’m going to check. When he got up there Tommy was in the tub. Tommy I see you’re in the tub.” Yea” Tommy said to his dad. At school Tommy and his friends played tag.


               Hey said” kid can I play. “Tommy said” yes you can play. Do you know some one a little here at school .Well can I be your friend. Yes you can the new kid said. Well I like you a lot.” Can you help me with my homework?” said Kid. “I will see what I can do. Said Tommy.”  See you later friend.                                                       



               John was a mean gummy bear. As Tommy could see John picked on him. Tommy was filling like he was going to cry. But Tommy said he was not going to care about what John said. He was very mean to the new kid. So at the last day of school Tommy had enough. So John pushed Tommy so a fight broke out. After Tommy got home his mom was upset that he had a black eye. Kid came over to see if Tommy was ok. After he was done taken a bath he said “I love you mom and goodnight.”</description>
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<p>           “Where do you think your going mister?”  Tommy didn’t answer his mom.. His mom chased after him but she was to late. Tommy was green with sky blue eyes. Tommy’s mom was a green gummy bear with red eyes. Tommy sometimes wears dippers. Some of his friends pick on him .So he tries to stop wearing it .He wears it so much it is starting to stink. Tommy’s friend said lets go play outside. Tommy never took a bath because he thought his mom would throw it away.</p>
<p>                  At school Tommy’s class got a new student. The new student was yellow with red hair. His Dad was going to come make him take a bath. Tommy’s dad was red with white hair. “Where is my son?” asked his dad. </p>
<p>                His mom said” He’s in his room maybe. Well I’m going to check. When he got up there Tommy was in the tub. Tommy I see you’re in the tub.” Yea” Tommy said to his dad. At school Tommy and his friends played tag.</p>
<p>               Hey said” kid can I play. “Tommy said” yes you can play. Do you know some one a little here at school .Well can I be your friend. Yes you can the new kid said. Well I like you a lot.” Can you help me with my homework?” said Kid. “I will see what I can do. Said Tommy.”  See you later friend.                                                       </p>
<p>               John was a mean gummy bear. As Tommy could see John picked on him. Tommy was filling like he was going to cry. But Tommy said he was not going to care about what John said. He was very mean to the new kid. So at the last day of school Tommy had enough. So John pushed Tommy so a fight broke out. After Tommy got home his mom was upset that he had a black eye. Kid came over to see if Tommy was ok. After he was done taken a bath he said “I love you mom and goodnight.”</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by Justin for Mr. e</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/02/12/silly-animal-problems-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-255</link>
		<dc:creator>Justin for Mr. e</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 17:49:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cues Not Rainbow

               Once upon a time in an underwater sea cave lived three fish named Daniel, Kristen, and Clue. 

Clue one day said, “I’m, not rainbow. 
	
“What?!  This is impossible!” said Daniel.  “We raised you, we helped you, and even with your homework.”
	 
“You may have, but I’m not rainbow.” Said Clue.

“ Wait, wait I’ve got it your playing a joke on us” said
 Kristen. 

Nope. You’re my parents, but I’m not rainbow, said 
Clue.

Wait I don’t get it were rainbow trout’s and were suppose to be rainbow. Ok, then you was rainbow yesterday, but not to day I mean that doesn’t make perfect sense.  You might be sick. Said Kristen”

“Yeah that could be it. Let’s go to Doctor Fisher’s office. Said Daniel” 

Ok, now that were in the car, are you sure you want to take me to the doctor. Said Kristen


“Yes, but you could get a shot. Said Clue”

“Well, I guess it want be that much harm. As long as I get better I want care.” Said Clue”

“Now that were back in the office and out of the waiting room we can get to work.” Said doctor fisher

“Ok, Clue you weigh 30 pounds and your height is 3 foot 2 inches. Ok, the doctor will be back here in a few minutes. Said doctor fisher

“Thank you. Said kristen

” I’m scared.”said clue

 “Why?”

 “Well I might not be rainbow for a long time.”

“I’m sure there’s a good explanation for this. “

“Hi, I’m Doctor Fisher. “a

  “Oh, what a good case of your not rainbow “

“Say what? Oh.

 “Yep, it should be gone in a couple of days. 

“So, no shots or medicine.”

“Yep.”

“Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! “Ok, any one up for some cookies.” 

“Yep. Ok, and then let’s eat. “Yum, yum, yum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cues Not Rainbow</p>
<p>               Once upon a time in an underwater sea cave lived three fish named Daniel, Kristen, and Clue. </p>
<p>Clue one day said, “I’m, not rainbow. </p>
<p>“What?!  This is impossible!” said Daniel.  “We raised you, we helped you, and even with your homework.”</p>
<p>“You may have, but I’m not rainbow.” Said Clue.</p>
<p>“ Wait, wait I’ve got it your playing a joke on us” said<br />
 Kristen. </p>
<p>Nope. You’re my parents, but I’m not rainbow, said<br />
Clue.</p>
<p>Wait I don’t get it were rainbow trout’s and were suppose to be rainbow. Ok, then you was rainbow yesterday, but not to day I mean that doesn’t make perfect sense.  You might be sick. Said Kristen”</p>
<p>“Yeah that could be it. Let’s go to Doctor Fisher’s office. Said Daniel” </p>
<p>Ok, now that were in the car, are you sure you want to take me to the doctor. Said Kristen</p>
<p>“Yes, but you could get a shot. Said Clue”</p>
<p>“Well, I guess it want be that much harm. As long as I get better I want care.” Said Clue”</p>
<p>“Now that were back in the office and out of the waiting room we can get to work.” Said doctor fisher</p>
<p>“Ok, Clue you weigh 30 pounds and your height is 3 foot 2 inches. Ok, the doctor will be back here in a few minutes. Said doctor fisher</p>
<p>“Thank you. Said kristen</p>
<p>” I’m scared.”said clue</p>
<p> “Why?”</p>
<p> “Well I might not be rainbow for a long time.”</p>
<p>“I’m sure there’s a good explanation for this. “</p>
<p>“Hi, I’m Doctor Fisher. “a</p>
<p>  “Oh, what a good case of your not rainbow “</p>
<p>“Say what? Oh.</p>
<p> “Yep, it should be gone in a couple of days. </p>
<p>“So, no shots or medicine.”</p>
<p>“Yep.”</p>
<p>“Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! “Ok, any one up for some cookies.” </p>
<p>“Yep. Ok, and then let’s eat. “Yum, yum, yum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Silly Animal Problems&#8221; Prompt by Rachel for Mr.E</title>
		<link>http://writingfix1.edublogs.org/2008/02/12/silly-animal-problems-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-254</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachel for Mr.E</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Oct 2009 17:43:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gary Gets His Tongue

Gary the anteater had a very short tongue, (obviously a very big problem for an anteater.) People often made fun of him as a child. When Gary became old enough to take care of himself, he was kicked out of the ant eater clan. His best friend, Harry the ant, tried to support him when he got kicked out of his own home for having a short tongue. Harry still kept his distance though just in case Gary’s tongue grew, and he ate Harry. 
	So Harry and Gary ran away. They were just about to reach a forest on the south side of Gary’s old home, when they heard a female voice from behind. It was a young spider named Sandy. 
“Hi!” she said “I’m Sandy. Can I come with you?”  
	“No!” said Gary, “I don’t even know who you are!”  
“Well I’m coming anyway and you can’t stop me.” Sandy said calmly.
	 Gary and Harry let Sandy come. What they didn’t know was that Sandy was planning on killing Gary, because she hated anteaters. She was going to try to bite him. This would poison him and he would die!
	Gary, Harry, and Sandy all continued to walk through the forest. They didn’t know were they where going or why, but they just kept on walking on through the long forest. 
	Then out of the dark depths of the forest they heard a voice. It got closer and closer until it seemed the voice was right beside them. Then out of the dark green forest an anteater jumped out of the bushes. 
“Hey!”  She said in a high pitch voice. “I’m Amy.”  She looked down at Harry. She didn’t move for some time before asking, “Why is there an ant here?”
	“Oh, well he’s my best friend.” Gary saw the look on her face knowing she was confused. “I’m a vegetarian.” He explained. She told them she was kicked of her clan for being a vegetarian. They gladly said she could join them.
	Harry and Gary went out to a small clearing so Gary could tell Harry not to be afraid of Amy. As they did this, Sandy decided to put her plan into action. 
	As she followed them out there a monkey grabbed Gary’s tongue thinking it was a bug. He pulled it up and Harry’s tongue grew just as Sandy jumped out at him. Then out of pure anteater instincts he ate Sandy.
	Weeks later Gary and Amy got married. They where accepted into a vegetarian anteater clan. Harry was their neighbor, and Harry and Gary stayed best friends. They all lived happily for the rest of their lives, and they where never bothered by spiders ever again!
The End By: Rachel</description>
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<p>Gary the anteater had a very short tongue, (obviously a very big problem for an anteater.) People often made fun of him as a child. When Gary became old enough to take care of himself, he was kicked out of the ant eater clan. His best friend, Harry the ant, tried to support him when he got kicked out of his own home for having a short tongue. Harry still kept his distance though just in case Gary’s tongue grew, and he ate Harry.<br />
	So Harry and Gary ran away. They were just about to reach a forest on the south side of Gary’s old home, when they heard a female voice from behind. It was a young spider named Sandy.<br />
“Hi!” she said “I’m Sandy. Can I come with you?”<br />
	“No!” said Gary, “I don’t even know who you are!”<br />
“Well I’m coming anyway and you can’t stop me.” Sandy said calmly.<br />
	 Gary and Harry let Sandy come. What they didn’t know was that Sandy was planning on killing Gary, because she hated anteaters. She was going to try to bite him. This would poison him and he would die!<br />
	Gary, Harry, and Sandy all continued to walk through the forest. They didn’t know were they where going or why, but they just kept on walking on through the long forest.<br />
	Then out of the dark depths of the forest they heard a voice. It got closer and closer until it seemed the voice was right beside them. Then out of the dark green forest an anteater jumped out of the bushes.<br />
“Hey!”  She said in a high pitch voice. “I’m Amy.”  She looked down at Harry. She didn’t move for some time before asking, “Why is there an ant here?”<br />
	“Oh, well he’s my best friend.” Gary saw the look on her face knowing she was confused. “I’m a vegetarian.” He explained. She told them she was kicked of her clan for being a vegetarian. They gladly said she could join them.<br />
	Harry and Gary went out to a small clearing so Gary could tell Harry not to be afraid of Amy. As they did this, Sandy decided to put her plan into action.<br />
	As she followed them out there a monkey grabbed Gary’s tongue thinking it was a bug. He pulled it up and Harry’s tongue grew just as Sandy jumped out at him. Then out of pure anteater instincts he ate Sandy.<br />
	Weeks later Gary and Amy got married. They where accepted into a vegetarian anteater clan. Harry was their neighbor, and Harry and Gary stayed best friends. They all lived happily for the rest of their lives, and they where never bothered by spiders ever again!<br />
The End By: Rachel</p>
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